[R.E.A.D.] Final Applications

[Xabre]

Final Applications


Alright, so you've gone through the Grand Gates, read all the things you need to know in order to play BARPG, and have submitted an application form.

Now, in order to submit your application as "final", you have to post the link to your application form here. The format is as follows:


Character Name, Division applying to
Link


Pretty much self explanatory, but I will just briefly go over it.

Character Name - Basically, you just write your character's name here. For example, if I were to apply, I would put Akimoto Shiragiku.

Division applying to - As the field requires, you put the division you are applying to here. For example, I would put 6th Division.

Link - Here, you put the direct link to your application thread. Should be simple enough. Just copy the address in your address bar when you get to your application thread and just paste it here.

So, just fill out everything right, and you should get something like this:

Example:
Akimoto Shiragiku, 6th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=20267


Oh and also, the bolding of text is not needed. Bolding was used here for example usage purposes.
Hold on!
Okay, we've gone over the basic format on how to post the link to your final application, but before you go ahead and post, run through this quick checklist to check that everything is right.

- Check for grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, typos and punctuation.
You can run this through a word processor to detect mistakes, but I recommend you go through it once more to manually pick out any mistakes you might have made.

- Are all the fields filled out properly?
Check to make sure that you have filled in all the required fields and make sure you've got enough text in there to impress the application team. You can always refer to past accepted applications to get an idea of what is needed in order to pass.

- Love your character!
When double checking your application, make sure that you absolutely love your character build. You will not be able to change your character after it is accepted (with the exception of hair and clothing of course), so take your time with creating the character of your choice. BARPG is not going anywhere!

- Have some critiques before submission
Unless your application is near flawless and very well done, we will forego this rule and allow you to get through without critiques from players. Other than that, any application submitted without at least a few critiques will be automtically be sent back to the drawing board.

As a new rule, applications have to be critiqued at least once before being submitted. Any final applications that are submitted without at least one critique will be ignored.

[alannacho]

Tendo Kazumi, 4th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=24459

[Zanpak]

Kuragari Zanpak 3rd Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=24688

[ranmataro]

Ranmataro, 4th Division
My Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=745292&postcount=1)

[gammaakutabi52]

Gamma Akutabi, 6th Division.

Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=24902)

[Kiyokawa Hibiki]

Kiyokawa Hibiki, 13th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=24712

Thanks.

~HK~

[blackheartz]

Succesful applications:
gammaakutabi52
Kiyokawa Hibiki

Unsuccesful applications:
ranmataro - Please re-arrange your application details. Also, your Zanpakutou Appearance is inadequate.
Zanpak - Inadequate in all sections.

[Blackout]

Michisige Kureno, 11th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=24786

[ranmataro]

ok i'm back, i think i fixed the problems

Ranmataro, 4th Division
My Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=749305&postcount=2)

[Ultranator]

Sucessful applications:

Michisige Kureno

Unsucessful applications:

Ranmatoro - I left you a comment earlier, you're almost there, dont give up.

[ranmataro]

he he i wont give up ^_^ in fact here!

Ranmataro, 4th Division
Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=745292&postcount=1)

[blackheartz]

he he i wont give up ^_^ in fact here!

Ranmataro, 4th Division
Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=745292&postcount=1)
Try not to keep submitting finals. Finals are when you're really sure you'll pass. :)

[Katen Kyokotsu]

Hideki Akira 12th Division


http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=24716

[ranmataro]

Try not to keep submitting finals. Finals are when you're really sure you'll pass. :)

i went back and fixed the problems, (at lest i think i got them all this time XD)

i thought i was supposed to re submit my application

[Ultranator]

Successfull Applications:

Hideki Akira

[Zanpak]

Heres mine checked the spellings and the division problem
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25038

[rewok]

Takeda Shingen, 12th Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25114&p=758038#post758038

[ranmataro]

sorry for re, and re, submitting but i think I got it down ^_^

Ranmataro, 4th DIvision
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=745292&postcount=1

[blackheartz]

Applications will take a break until Tuesday, 3rd June 2008, when Lolo-chan is back from visiting.

[ZhaneXDivineD]

Zhane Kusagi, 11th Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25356

[Ultranator]

Applications Approved:

Zhane Kusagi, 11th Division
Ranmataro, 4th DIvision

Applications Denied:
Zanpak - Refer to the reply in your App thread. Also, please read the sticky on final apps and post in the correct format.

[jessy86]

Final application

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25116

Thanks :)

[Quincyboy]

Fuecid Wynala, 12th division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25505

[blackheartz]

As a new rule, applications have to be critiqued at least once before being submitted. Any final applications that are submitted without at least one critique will be ignored.

[reggin]

Final Application:
Arisume Marikō <6th Division> (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25397)

[blackheartz]

Approved:
[7th] Jessymoto Talbain - You'll need to work a little harder on your vocab and sentence structuring to pull more points off me. Good luck!

[6th] Arisume Marikō - Welcome to the BARPG, finally.

Try again:
Fuecid Wynala - Buff up your application a lot more. Comments are there, so work on it.

[setbaby]

My Application

Yuutoku Seigi, 8th Division (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25249)

[Ultranator]

Yuutoku Seigi, 8th Division - We are unable to accept your application at this time. You are free to try again, but I would suggest finding someone at home to help you by critiquing you and helping you write.

[Rin925]

Alright, well here goes mine, I guess. My final application:

Arisu Yamashina <10th Division> (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25642)

[setbaby]

Final Application

Yuutoku Seigi, 8th Division (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25249)

[Quincyboy]

Fuecid Wynala, 12th division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25505

Ive made a bunch of changes. Let's what you think this time.

[Aicerno]

Accepted:
Arisu Yamashina, 10th Division

[setbaby]

Final Application

Yuutoku Seigi, 8th Division (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25249)

I believe that I have edited everything in my application and it now has no fragmented sentences or run-ons.
Please give it another read!

[cestlunar]

Adia Roscelle, 8th Division

Final Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=26469)

[vale of the gate]

Tarokeshi,Beratora,11th division http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=26078
this is my final application ive done all i can.

[Ultranator]

Applications approved:
Adia Roscelle, 8th Division

Applications not approved
Tarokeshi,Beratora,11th division - read my responce in your app thread.
Yuutoku Seigi, 8th Division - Your application is still full of run ons and sentance fragments.

[Quincyboy]

Fuecid Wynala, 12th division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=25505

Oh here it goes. Here it goes. Hear it goes again.
Oh hear it goes again!
Yeah!

[Dubtiger]

Seikouchi Fujiwara, 13th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=27057

[Ultranator]

Application Successfull:

Seikouchi Fujiwara, 13th Division

[vale of the gate]

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=26078 i have done everything i was told to do.

[Ultranator]

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=26078 i have done everything i was told to do.

I only read hrough your appearance section. I found at least 5 mistakes in just that section alone. You should read through your whole application slowly, and out loud. Using spell check won't fix everything.

[Mago_ichi]

Ranmataro, 4th Division
My Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showpost.php?p=745292&postcount=1)
very nice story id like to read more if your up to writing it:D

[Kimishiro]

Raishin, Kimishiro - 13th Division

Raishin, Kimishiro (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=28462)

[Senb0nzakura]

Akira Kenta, 11th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=28876

[Ultranator]

Zukitakata Jishikatote. <2nd Division>

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=929800#post929800

You need to review the application rules. You're not supposed to post a final until someone comments on your application. Also, you should take a look at the application guide. You need to include a 1000 word sample mission in your application.
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Approved Applications:

Akira Kenta, 11th Division

Raishin, Kimishiro - 13th Division

[Lone_ronin]

M Ookami
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=28822

[LightWing2]

Light Tsubasa (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=30195)


Hope this is what I do with it now?

[blankdoor]

Ross sumisu, 12th division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=30054

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Ross Sumisu, 12th Division

Approved

Light Tsubasa, 10th Division

I'm gonna wait two more days to see if Hiro looks through it...

[LightWing2]

Ross Sumisu, 12th Division

Approved

Light Tsubasa, 10th Division

I'm gonna wait two more days to see if Hiro looks through it...


Okay, thanks!

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Light Tsubasa, 10th Division
Appoved: Though I feel I should tell you that the current 10th Captain is a man.

[Ugaki]

Ugaki Yaromoto
7th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=30643

[LightWing2]

O.O;; Okay thank you for the advice!

[Lone_ronin]

Umm...I had posted my Final Application a few weeks ago and I haven't heard anything In a while. If there is some problem with it or if it isn't good enough I would like to know.

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

M Ookami, 6th Division

Denied: Everything up to your Sample Mission doesn't have enough detail to it.
Sample Mission: You need to make it look neater. A new paragraph starts when someone else begins to talk. Just a few tweaks there and you should resubmit.

Ugaki Yaromoto
7th Division

Denied: No one even reviewed your Application; it says in the Rules that you CAN'T Submit a Final App until you have at least one person reply to your App.

[Ugaki]

Ugaki Yaromoto
7th Division

Denied: No one even reviewed your Application; it says in the Rules that you CAN'T Submit a Final App until you have at least one person reply to your App.



oh sorry...I must have miss read that part

[Gods_Might10]

Raven Westward
Division 6
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=31436

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Raven Westward
Division 6

Denied: You need to expand a little more in the Physical Appearance, Personality, Bio, and Zanpakuto sections before reapplying.

[Gods_Might10]

Raven Westward
Division 6
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1053302#post1053302

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Raven Westward
Division 6


I'll take it! APPROVED

[Aquila]

Shirotaka
8th Division - Tactical Stealth Operations
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=32176

[MagicalBells]

Shirotaka, 8th Division.

Application Approved.

[Torack234]

Kato, Daishiro, 3rd Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=32175

[MattDilworth]

Matthew Dilworth 13th Squad

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=32674

[blankdoor]

Matthew Dilworth 13th Squad

Denied: please refer to your post for details

[MattDilworth]

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=32674

Matt Dilworth 13th squad

okay i've changed what you told me to change :)

[blankdoor]

Matthew Dilworth 13th Squad

Application Approved.

[Rayth Vincent]

Rayth Vincent -- 11th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=32789

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Rayth Vincent 11th Division


APPROVED Look forward to seeing your missions!

[zabimaru_08]

Ryouichi,
12th division,
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=27609&p=1102343#post1102343

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

A little more slim then I generally accept them. But it looks good and you look like you have potential with that sample mission you wrote so...


ACCEPTED

[Tempest Winds]

Tempest Winds, 7th division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=33470

[blankdoor]

Tempest Winds, 7th division

Denied: please refer to your post for details

[Masurao]

Masurao Susamajii, 2nd Division.
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=34173

[blankdoor]

Masurao Susamajii, 2nd Division.

Denied: please refer to your post for details

[Masurao]

Masurao Susamajii, 2nd Division.
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=34173

[blankdoor]

Masurao Susamajii, 2nd Division.

Accepted

[Kaiden Rezain]

Kaiden Rezain, Seventh Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=36069

[blankdoor]

Kaiden Rezain, 7th Division

Accepted

[HaiLun]

Owan Azami, Eighth division
Link (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=37241)

[blankdoor]

Owan Azami, Eighth division

Accepted
Also you are the first person ever to call me blankdoor-sama, that made me smile =P

[aquaticblue]

Kitsumi Mai, 2nd division
application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1214214#post1214214)

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Kitsumi Mai, 2nd division


APPROVED

[Op-Coloris]

Sathice Saitou, 13th Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1218928#post1218928

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Sathice Saitou, 13th Division

APPROVED

[kioshi-higosha]

Kioshi Higosha, 11th Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=38884

[blankdoor]

Kioshi Higosha, 11th Division

APPROVED

[babychocospark]

Name: Yasu Yori Takeshi (translation: Peaceful Trusting Warrior].)

Zanpaktou: Himitsu ikari
I have drawn a picture aske and i will link to you

Age at death: Unknown

Age in death: 195

Date of birth 28th of september

Specialities:


Personality:
Yasu Is a quiet one always looking to further his abilatys. Always helping but never talking much to otheres.Never wanting anything from othere but there help when needed. Doesnt like taking things from otheres


Physical Appearance: I stand a helthy 5'10'' My hair is a little long and black, my eyes are the lightest blue with black in center, My chest peice is a Grey like "tanktop" with 1 sholder on the left hand side, I were normal shimigami pants.

Biography:
Yasu Is a quiet one always looking to further his abilatys. Not knowing how to use his abilaties all he knows is the name of his Zanpakutou and talks to the 2 forms. Bleaves to be his fater and mothers sperit. They gave there last breath and reitsu to make his blade from there own. all he remembers is being hiden in a desert wraped in his fathers robe. A note pind to him telling him to run and hide. It went on to tell him that he was found wandering around side the woods.hiding not knowing his own name. It then said him and his new family were taken by a group of rouge death gods. his mothere and fater faught and all 3 got a way but were lost in a desert. only leaugs a way from the soul sociaty they were attacted buy a group of holows him being young and not knowing how to fight that well was the first out. When he awok he was in a building still wraped in the robe. the old man that found them told him he was found in the roab with the Zanpakutou straped to his side.
____________________
If i missed any thing please let me know


______________________
DAY 1.R]
It was a dark, gloomy day. The air was dry.
As Yasu Yori Takeshi stood there (with one hand on his Zanpakutou) not wanting to look back knowing the old man whas not wanting him to go. Yasu puts his free hand up and said in a low toan "ill be back in a 5 days time, but if im not I don't want you to look for me, can you do that for me please?"
"I can do that for you, but do be carful , dont put your heart all on this"
"I will try thats all i can do"

After that no more was said. Yasu ran into the blowing winds of the dessert. He didnt know were he was going he, or even were to go. All he knew was the feeling in his heart was telling him what way to run. He would only stop when the winds and dust made it inposable to see. He found a old building to rest in. as he stood out side he said to him self this will have to wok for to night"

[COLOR="DarkOrange"]are you sure you can do this? Better yet are you sure you even want to try ?
You dont know what you will find and what if you dont like what you will find?
What are you going to do if you compleat this little mission of yours?
Why arent you answering us?

Why should i answere you when you wont even answer my 1 question?

Beacuse the question you ask has no answer.
Belive us if we knew we would tell you.
We our selfs dont know were were formed all we knowis the day you awoke in that house is the day we awoke.

im going to bed god night Himitsu ikari

DAY 2.

Yasu awoke to the screem of what sounded like a little kid. As he started to get up a yound boy ran in yelling "Help me its after me again."
Yasu gumping to his feet telliing the young boy to stay were he was laying and hide him self under his robe that he was laying on.
Advancing out side to see a big cloud of dust, with a werid looking figure in standing in the middle laughing.

"Ha Ha Ha Ha, look here the boy has turned in to a man. are you ready to become my meal boy?

"Boy? I see you must be the one after this chiled."

"Oh your not that boy ........ It dosent matter i will destoy you any wayyyyyyyyy

The beast coming from the dust lunging at Yasu mouth wide open. His giant hands wide open.
~it was a hollow that stood only 7ft tall the lower part his body was small wile the top half bigger then most. It looked as if it walked on his hands like a ape in the human world would. Along his back was a fin like spine, His face small and seamed to be almost swallowed buy his muscles in his sholders. To Yasu he felt a strang conection to this hollow as if he has sean him before.~

In that one instance Yasu jumbed up and over the Hollow unshetheing Himitsu ikari. Still in the air Yasu slashes in a diagonal manner atempting to slice through the bease that was now coming to a halt. The Hollow in a instance was now charging back at him yelling" stay put you scrony little runt so i can devour you" "never " disclamed Yasu.. Not being able to move out of the way fast enough gets hit by the holows big hand. Yasu was pined down only one hand was free. It was his luck that it was the one holding his zanpoktou.
"what is your name hollow?"
"kengen-ryoushi"(powere hunter)
"are you the one who took my futaoya(parents)?"
"ah i thought i reconized you, i hope you will be as good as them"
In tha that moment kengen-ryoushitosed Yasu in to the air folowing close behind mouth wide open.
"I wont go that easy," holding his Zanpoktou out to the right of him swinging the sword behind him "Come forth Kamisama hitokiri" fliping it back around to his right side. "May they have mercy on you: show him the pain in our heart katto kousen iki(cutting war breath)" At that second at the tip of his blade a clear ball with what appered to be lighting formed. Bringing his blade from the right and swinging in a under hand motion verticly slashing with a fick of his wrist sent his attack streched in a longated form, flying faster then even himself could move. As soon as his attack hit kengen-ryoushi every thing went white in a blinding flash.

After the dust had finish setteling and not seeing anything remaing of kengen-ryoushi. Yasu ran back in to the building finding the young boy standing there looking up at him.

"did you get him?"
"yes, were are you parents we have to get you back to them "
"they are gone, that thing ate them 3 days ago this used to be my house untill it came"
" then it is setteled you will come with me back to my home were you will be safe"
"are you sure it will be safe?"
"yes i dont know any place that is safer then there"

It was already getting late so Yasu and the boy decided to stay there one more night then leave. That night Yasu talked to the boy about were it was they were heading. with every word that he spoke the boy became more thrilled to go.

Day 3

The day was nice no winds a clear blue day.

Yasu was the first awake. "hay boy time to go"
"I have a name you know"scolded the boy"oh ? what is it then ?" "its nikui shuchou"(hard headed). "what a fitting name that is for you are you ready to go?"
"yes let me grab 1 thing first" the boy ran to the end of the building bicked up a big box and tied it to his back. " ok now im ready"

It took most longer to get back beacuse of nikui being so young. Once they were out side of the forest they decided to make camp nikui did not let go of the box and passed right out. Yasu perching him self next to a tree by the boy and closed his eyes. It didnt take long for Himitsu ikari to show.
So you got your revenge now what?
Yes now what are you going to do?
I will first take this boy to the old man and have him look after him i will then go and try to becom a member of the gotie 13 I am not yet strong enough to weild your power and i need there help and training.
then were are with you on this and will help the best were can
yes we shall but remember of the danger that comes with the lust for power
I shall goodnight

Day 4
. . .

Day 5
. . .




Brent_Beast, welcome the the BARPG, and please be informed that in order to have an application posted here, it must be applied and critiqued first in the Scarlet Lobby (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=28). If all is good is when you are prompted to finalize your application, but please do not post here unless you've gone through those steps.

If you want to take the BARPG seriously and you really want to apply, you might want to read the Basic Shinigami Newbie Guide (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=21842), and right after, is when you might want to take a look at the Shinigami Application guide (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=21844).

[hidama]

Hidama,12th division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=40023

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Hidama,12th division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=40023



Application Approved

[ElCubano]

Nagoyaka Yochi, 11th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=41160

[Xemorus]

Nogoyaka Yochi, 11th Division

Application Approved

[Grimmjow13]

Name: Amico Migliorre
Division applying to: 11th division

My application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=41066)

[Justsomeanimelover]

Ama no Kagaseo, 6th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=39321

[MagicalBells]

Amico Migliorre, 11th Division

Application Denied. You still need to increase your biography and make your sample mission a little bit neater. Please PM blankdoor and speak with him about your application. He may be able to give you a great deal of assistance.

Ama no Kagaseo, 6th Division

Application Approved.

[Takashi Murimoto]

Takashi "Fasut" Murimoto

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=41226

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Takashi Murimoto

You need to work a little on making sure all your paragraphs are seperated but a good solid APP none the less.

APPROVED

[anime-niac]

Hakuro Kawazoe, 13th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=42395

Sorry for the wait, but getting around to finishing up my appi among my IRL applications was tedious, but here it is. Hope you enjoy it, and if it's approved please look forward to Hakuro's dark development as his personality changes from how he is in the sample to present time.

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Hakuro Kawazoe, 13th Division

A solid little APP there. Just a few reminders you can use your old character's ZG, don't know if I said this already. And Officially Welcome Back!

APPLICATION APPROVED

[Rin925]

Mitsuko Nakagawa, 2nd Division.

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=43823 (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=43823)

[blankdoor]

Wow Rinny your so formal:

Approved

once again I need 10 words, this getting annoying =P

[kiske]

Mitsuka Manuyoto 13th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1458844#post1458844

[babychocospark]

kiske, you would need to have a draft application first before you can post in this thread. And please read the reminders that I posted on the application before you post here.

note: Please don't post here non applications, if you have any questions, ask in the help threads.

[Hax4u]

Dameon Rayas <12th division>

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=45777

[blankdoor]

Dameon Rayas <12th division>

Approved

If people are curious about the lack of critiques on his app, we discussed it on skype and I critiqued on there.

[FarShot]

Solar Tenshu <1st Division>

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1501586#post1501586

[blankdoor]

Solar Tenshu <1st Division>

Approved

I think you will be the only man active in the 1st division, unless I forgot about someone, anyway good luck man.

[nashira-san]

Naichingeru Kuroise 3rd Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=47283

[Zadoc]

Zadoc, 11th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=48039

[Bluerose]

ok people here is my final application.
Thanks for the help
Shion Bluerose 13th division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=47713

[babychocospark]

Naichingeru Kuroise 3rd Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=47283

Zadoc, 11th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=48039

ok people here is my final application.
Thanks for the help
Shion Bluerose 13th division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=47713


To all three of you, application approved.

I might as well apologize too for not approving these applications earlier but see, this isn't supposed to be my location but because of the prolonged absence of the shinigami mods, I might as well approve these applications because it's been lingering here for too long. I hope you understand.

Now, you're all ready to go. =)

[ilustar]

Takahara Pēchin, 8th Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=52093

[anime-niac]

Takahara Pēchin, 8th Division

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=52093

Takahara Penchin <8th Division>

Sorry for the long delay. Application approved. Once again, watch out for your grammar. As you continue through the barpg you'll find that your writing ability will slowly improve. However, take it slow. There's no rush involved, so feel free to move at your own pace.

Welcome to the barpg, and good luck. Hope to see you around.

p.s. Submit your sample for a grade. You'll get a nice start-off ZG.

[ilustar]

Thats awesome! Thank you very much for your help, I will definately try brush up on my grammar! :)

:D

[Thorunn]

Thouro Tategami, 11th Division
Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1685678#post1685678)

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Thouro Tategami, 11th Division



A pretty decent APP, a few writing tweaks that need to be fixed but that will come with experience as you write more missions. Nicely done Touro.
APPROVED

-Captain Z

[Swebb]

Character Name, Division applying to : Ryan Murugama. 12th Division
Link : Click here for my first application thread. (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=53506)

[ulquiorra_117]

Amaya Satō, 12th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=53507

[blankdoor]

Amaya Satō, 12th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=53507

Character Name, Division applying to : Ryan Murugama. 12th Division
Link : Click here for my first application thread. (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=53506)

By the power vested in me by the state of Nevada I know pronounce you man and wife . . . wait wrong place

Both applications accepted, I shall be available if you have any questions

~Blank, 12th division Vice-captain

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

By the power vested in me by the state of Nevada I know pronounce you man and wife . . . wait wrong place

Both applications accepted, I shall be available if you have any questions

~Blank, 12th division Vice-captain

But Blank you don't live in Nevada! You live across the pond. :p

-Cy

[Vincente]

Vincente Silvario
13th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=35929

[anime-niac]

Vincente Silvario
13th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=35929


You've been rejected from being rejected. Welcome to the BARPG. Go make your profile in the dossiers and cash in that sample for a hefty starter ZG.

[Lumen_Latonesh]

Lumen Latonesh. 6th Division.
Character Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1794306#post1794306)

[anime-niac]

Lumen Latonesh. 6th Division.
Character Application (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1794306#post1794306)

Application Approved. Welcome to the BARPG. Get some started ZG by submitting your sample mission for grading.

[Zetsumei Kiba]

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1873405#post1873405

Zetsumei Kiba <12th Division>

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?p=1873405#post1873405

Zetsumei Kiba <12th Division>

Application Approved: I'd like to Officially welcome you to our family here. Remember to post you sample mission again for points!

[OceanBreeze]

Maeda Hatsuharu, 5th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=58999

[Ultranator]

Maeda Hatsuharu, 5th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=58999

And the winner is.... You! Welcome to the BARPG! Go ahead and post your sample mission for some quick ZG if you so desire.

[Uryu72]

Vincent Valen, 7th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=59850

So much editing......:)

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Vincent Valen, 7th Division

Application Approved
Post up that Sample for some points now! :D

[maniacs r us]

Victor Dumass, 9th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=62480

fingers crossed...

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Victor Dumass, 9th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=62480

fingers crossed...

APPLICATION STATUS:
APPROVED

Your Division currently has an NPC Captain whom you may use as a Ninth Divisioner and is my character's sister so if you have any questions just ask me.

[Ginalmighty]

Aurum Delvalle, 3rd Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=62397

[anime-niac]

Aurum Delvalle, 3rd Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=62397
Your application has been denied. Please read the comments I left in your application and review it.

[CantinTheGreat]

Ryuhi Nakajima, 7th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=63123&p=2074777#post2074777

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Ryuhi Nakajima, 7th Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=63123&p=2074777#post2074777


Application Status:
APPROVED
Nice looking application. Your current Vice-Captain, soon to be Captain, is Kaiden Rezain (both player and character name.). If you have any questions about the Seventh throw them his way. Otherwise feel free to PM anytime with any questions!

[blaze red1]

Kouga Masumota 11th division

Application for Kouga Masumota

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Kouga Masumota 11th division

Application for Kouga Masumota

Application Status:
APPROVED
Congrats on becoming a member of BARPG if you have ANY questions at all please don't hesitate to ask me.

[Ginalmighty]

Aurum Delvalle, 3rd Division
http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=62397

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Aurum Delvalle, 3rd Division

Application Status:

Normally I would like a little longer biography but I'll give you a chance.

APPROVED

[Arrahnavard]

12th Division Application

Here (http://www.bleachanime.org/forums/showthread.php?t=64855&p=2145987#post2145987)

[Cyclonus_Zaero]

Sensui Raizen Application Status:

APPROVED

That was really a good APP just for the record from the get go. Kudos.