[Application] Fuecid Wynala <12th Division>

[Quincyboy]

Name: Fuecid Wynala

Age: Age at Death 23
Age in Soul Society 736
Appearance: see second page application.
Personality: Fuecid is Calm, collected and cold. He can be kind but is very analytical and so can appear impersonal. He is extremely intelligent and never shows signs of anger or frustration.

Fuecid is devoted to the causes he believes in. He views misconduct and disorderliness as signs of weakness and/or lack of faith in ones cause. He is eloquent and controlled and carries himself like a noble. Lastly he is wise and therefore not terribly arrogant.

Biography: Fuecid carries vauge memory of his life as a mortal. Hhe was a noble and heir of his powerful family in late 18th century England. He was brought up to be perfect and exemplify all the traits of a young noble. Manners, strength, knowledge, insight,etc.
Upon turning the age of 13 his Father revealed that the Wynala family were Quincy. The family was one of the first Quincy families and his father held a position on the Quincy council of elders. Fuecid devoted himself to the Quincy cause and mastery of their art. By the age of 23 he was being reviewed to become an elder. He would have been the youngest in history.

Then the Quincy/Shinigami war broke out. In his final battle Fuecid witnessed his comrades’ souls devoured by hollows as the Shinigami stood by and allowed it. When Fuecid fell however he did not go to Hueco Mundo. Before he was devoured a mysterious Shinigami thrust their hilt into him sending him to Soul Society. To this day he does not know the identity of that shinigami.

In SS, Fuecid went into hiding in the forests away from Rukongai. There he remained studying the Shinigami and thinking of a way he could sabotage them and aid the Quincy. He performed a few acts and became an outlaw. When he learned of the Quincy’a he preoccupied himself with remaining in solitude and thinking on the past and the Shinigami’s motives and ideology.

Division: 12th division

Zanpakutou appearance: Fuecid's zanpaktou is shaped like an elongated S withthe top and bottom thirds chopped off.. The form gives the impression of a new spring sprout. The sword is 49 & 3/4 inches long, with the blade measuring 24 & 1/8 inches in length.

Hilt- the hilt makes up over half the sword and at the last few inches curves downward completing the lower portion of the S shape. Along the hilt is a spiral platinum vine design. The end of the hilt has a small platinum pommel where the vine design ends. The hilt is steel with black leather wrapping.

Blade- the blade completes the upper half of the S shape and curves as well. it is about 2 inches in height and tapers upward to a point at the end. His zanpaktou's sheath is held at Fuecid's left side by being passed through the sash. It is made of black leather with Platinum leaf design.

When fighting with his zanpaktou Fuecid will fight using speed and centripetal force rather than strength because he will slash quickly and often spin to give hits greater force.

Sample Mission

“Another group is after me. This one appears to be somewhat intelligent. I may have to use my traps." Thinks Fuecid Wynala as he flitted through the forest with ease. The sounds of pursuit could be heard in the distance. Fuecid made his way to an outcropping of rock and waited. A few Shinigami appeared through the trees and surrounded the pile of boulders. One stepped foreword.

“Halt. We have you surrounded and escape is hopeless. Please come peaceably or we will have to use force.”

Fuecid looks down at the shinigami and says calmly.

“I’m sorry but I must respectably decline your offer. I will remain here.”

The Shinigami motioned and the others moved in, zanpaktous at the ready. Then the leader attempted to shunpo next to Fuecid. Fuecid saw it coming, released a drop of liquid onto the boulders, and hirenkyakued into the nearby forest. Upon impact the boulder reacted and began a chain reaction with those below it. The rocks melted seeping around the shinigami and then solidified locking them in place. Fuecid, seeing his trap succeed, turned and made his way deeper into the forest.

“Foolish shinigami, How could the Quincy ever be defeated by them?”

As Fuecid made his way through the forest he noticed that it had grown suspiciously quiet. He began to move with more caution as he traversed the brambles and undergrowth of the forest. Never once did one briar or thorn catch him or speck of dirt smear for he moved with impeccable precision, moving quickly yet carefully. As he neared his next trap he felt a short pulse of reiatsu. Fuecid paused began to muse over what he just felt.

“Someone is hiding their presence from me. Why did they let that pulse slip? Are they inexperienced? Or perhaps it was done on purpose to lead me astray. This individual may be in a command position and gave the order to the Shinigami to hold back. I have two choices really, continue to the next trap or, move away from my planned course and take on the unknown of what is to come. I shall continue. This person most likely wanted to lead me off course on purpose.”

Fuecid continued on his course moving quickly. More cautious than ever, he hid his reiatsu to an even greater extant to prevent detection while remaining focused on sensing any sign of danger. He came upon a clearing with a small pond in the middle.

“Here it is. This is also where I sensed the pulse.”

Fuecid walked surreptitiously to the pond. He was about to set foot into the water but before touching it he stopped. A thought ran through his head.

“Behind Me….”

Suddenly A shinigami appeared behind Fuecid. Her zanpaktou across Fuecid’s throat. Strangely she said nothing. Nor did she move. Fuecid brought his hand forward revealing a needled syringe. The shinigami collapsed.

“Injected her just in time. It appears that she was the one who emitted the pulse earlier based off the burst I felt as she shunpoed. Or perhaps not…… I must remain vigilant. Time to prepare the trap.”

Fuecid walked into the shallow pool of water and released his reiatsu. Then he slowly sunk underneath. Mirrors revealed themselves inside the pool and created an illusion of Fuecid standing upon the water. A team of four shinigami walked over to the pool blades at the ready. One stepped forward.

“We are here to bring you an offer. If you refuse, we are under orders to capture or kill you.”

The illusion said nothing and a look of frustration came across the shinigami’s face

“Very well then I will take that response as a no.”

The illusion calmly brought up his hand and beckoned the shinigami forward confidently. At that gesture the shinigami grew nervous and hesitated to act. The leader in frustration charged forward and the others followed his lead. As they plunged into the pool their legs froze in place as the water turned instantly to ice. Strangely however, there was a layer of water still around Fuecid. Suddenly the water around the illusion burst into flames and enveloped it. When it died down the illusion was gone. Oil on top of the water burned away. The shinigami began to break themselves free from the ice.

One of the Shinigami spoke, “Where did the body go? Is he dead? I guess we should report this as suicide.”

The leader replied, “That man unnerved me. I’ll take your suggestion.” The shinigami then returned to the forest making their way back to the seireitei.

Fuecid opened a hatch in the forest and left the tunnel that lead under the pool.

“Most excellent, now I will be reported as dead and perhaps have some peace for the next hundred years.”

A voice behind Fuecid speaks calmly, “Those traps you employed where impressive. Excellent use of science in my opinion.”

Fuecid whirled around to see a shinigami standing calmly behind him zanpaktou sheathed. This one wore a badge on his bicep.

The shinigami says, "I am the vice- captain of squad 12 of the Gotei 13. It is my pleasure to make your acquaintance.”

Fuecid thinks to himself, “A Vice-Captain! This is beyond me. He seems cordial enough. I suppose I should hear him out.”

Fuecid says to the vice-captain “I was once known as Fuecid Wynala. Now I am referred to as the ghost of the Quincy by the citizens of Soul Society. Now that I have introduced myself would you please inform of your intentions.”

The vice-captain replies, “I am here to simply recruit you. I wish you to join the shinigami and eventually my division. I seek to understand and better relations with the Quincy. I believe you could be crucial in that endeavor. You may not know this but the Quincy exist yet again in the living world. “

Fuecids thoughts race through his mind, “The Quincy have returned. I know the Shinigami had a just cause to try and bring about the Quincy’s extinction and I have forgiven them. This shinigami’s offer is attractive. No more hiding, no more running.”

The soul says,” You have swayed me. I accept.”

[rewok]

Zanpakuto needs a better description, how he carries it, etc.

So does personality.


Sample mission needs to be 3rd person, and it's tough to follow dialouge. Plus, using other people's characters in your stories is generally considered bad taste without permission.

[Quincyboy]

Here I made some changes. I hope its better.

The mission was in 3rd person but I made some changes to make it seem so. I also removed Cyclonus and put in a VC. Read it over and give me more feedback. Ill keep at this until its acceptable

[blackheartz]

Try to put in some post formatting for your application to make it look neater and organized. Bolding the headers will help alot.

There are a few unnecessary capitalized words that worked against your grammar. There was also a full-stop too many which made the entire thing seem very choppy. Also, it is advised not to refer to any other characters for description, in this case, Ukitake. Variating how you describe your character will also improve your application as you always "he" or "his" which gets very boring as people read on. Try to use a new paragraph every four to six sentences to allow a rest of the eyes.

Overall, fix the spelling and grammar errors by lumping your application into a word processor (eg. MS Word) and it'll look better already. Then working on it from there will be a whole lot easier.

edit: Also, this RPG takes place 2 to 3 millenniums after the original Bleach canon.

[alannacho]

I have to agree with blackheartz. Using a word processing program to type up your missions first will assist you with making sure that the spelling and grammar are correct. It also is a good thing to have a 3rd party to critique your mission and go over it for punctuation and grammar.

Also, it does get hard to read the application at times due to the length of the paragraphs. As blackheartz suggested, a new paragraph every 4 to 6 sentences will help. This can be applied to your missions as well once you are accepted.

Instead of this...
Biography: Fuecid carries a near complete memory of his life on Earth. There he was a noble and heir of his powerful family in late 18th century England. He was brought up to be perfect and exemplify all the traits of a young noble. Manners, strength, knowledge, insight, etc. Upon turning the age of 13 his Father revealed that the Wynala family was Quincy. The family was one of the first Quincy families and his father held a position of the Quincy council of elders. Fuecid devoted himself to the Quincy cause and mastery of their art. By the age of 23 he was being reviewed to become an elder. He would have been the youngest in history. Then the Quincy/Shinigami war broke out. In his final battle Fuecid witnessed his comrades’ souls devoured by hollow as the Shinigami stood by and allowed it. When Fuecid fell however he did not go to Hueco Mundo. Before he was devoured a mysterious Shinigami thrust their hilt into him sending him to Soul Society. To this day he does not know the identity of that shinigami. In SS, Fuecid went into hiding in the forests away from Rukongai. There he remained studying the Shinigami and thinking of a way he could sabotage them and aid the Quincy. He performed a few acts and became an outlaw. When he learned of the Quincy’s annihilation he preoccupied himself with remaining in solitude and thinking on the past and the Shinigami’s motives and ideology.

try this.
Biography: Fuecid carries a near complete memory of his life on Earth. There he was a noble and heir of his powerful family in late 18th century England. He was brought up to be perfect and exemplify all the traits of a young noble. Manners, strength, knowledge, insight, etc. Upon turning the age of 13 his Father revealed that the Wynala family was Quincy.

The family was one of the first Quincy families and his father held a position of the Quincy council of elders. Fuecid devoted himself to the Quincy cause and mastery of their art. By the age of 23 he was being reviewed to become an elder. He would have been the youngest in history. Then the Quincy/Shinigami war broke out.

In his final battle Fuecid witnessed his comrades’ souls devoured by hollow as the Shinigami stood by and allowed it. When Fuecid fell however he did not go to Hueco Mundo. Before he was devoured a mysterious Shinigami thrust their hilt into him sending him to Soul Society. To this day he does not know the identity of that shinigami.

In SS, Fuecid went into hiding in the forests away from Rukongai. There he remained studying the Shinigami and thinking of a way he could sabotage them and aid the Quincy. He performed a few acts and became an outlaw. When he learned of the Quincy’s annihilation he preoccupied himself with remaining in solitude and thinking on the past and the Shinigami’s motives and ideology.

As you can see, creating separate paragraphs not only makes the reading smooth, it also allows the transition from one focus to another to flow easier. I did not correct for punctuation with the above example.

[Quincyboy]

Okay Ive changed some of the problems. Keep me posted on my application

Thank You

Kyuubi

[Quincyboy]

Okay Appearence has been fixed but in order to keep it under the character limit I couldnt space it out how you guys like.

[Aicerno]

Fuecid appears to have aged only 7 years in other words one for every 100. This means that he looks to be about 30 years old. On Earth Fuecid was an English Noble. This shows in his appearance. He has 3 feet of hair and it is dark brown in color. It is kept straight and is and well groomed. Fuecids facial features could be described as extremly fair. Strong jawed and defined yet radiant and somewhat feminine, possesing what could be described as a terrible beauty. His build is Slim and somewhat athletic. Though not bulky he is not frail either. He is very tall and stands at about 6 feet 4 inches in height.

Hmm looking over the application, I would put forth the proposition that most shinigami do not actually have a working memory of what their mortal lives were like until they become seated officers--or else get placed into a location or situation that forces them to recall those events. Not that there's a hard and fast rule on that.

As for comments on the quotation above, you might want to consider this:

For his age, Feucid appeared to have aged seven years for every one-hundred years, giving him the appearance of one who was in their thirties. As a mortal, Feucid was an English Nobleman, and he carried himself as such even after death. He stood 6'4" in height, with a slim and athletic build.

His hair was three-feet in length, straight, and he kept it well groomed at all times, almost to the point of being accused of narcissism. His face was slightly feminine in appearance, with a strong prominent jaw and possessing what some might term 'a terrible beauty'.

Something to note is that there is only one earth, and then there is Soul society which is something a little different from earth. Instead of saying 'on earth' you ought to say, "when living as a mortal" or "when alive..." so that this denotes a different life from the one you are living in Soul Society.

[Ultranator]

I just noticed your zanpakuto discription. Instead of saying your sword looks just like the picture, you should actually describe it with words.

[Quincyboy]

Name: Fuecid Wynala

Age: Age at Death 23
Age in Soul Society 736
Appearance: Fuecid appears to have aged seven years for every one-hundred, giving him the appearance of one in his early thirties. As a mortal, Fuecid was an English Nobleman, and he carries himself as such even after death. He stands 6'4'' in height, with a slim and athletic build.

His hair is three feet in length and white-blond. He keeps it straight and well groomed at all times. Fuecids facial features could be described as, Strong jawed and angular yet radiant and somewhat feminine, possesing what could be described as a terrible beauty. The most prominent feature of his face are his eyes. They are a stunning deep blue and many have said when gazing upon them that its as if they were being pulled into an ocean.

His shinigami uniform is slim and doesn’t billow excessively. He wears a pair of white gloves that end at mid fore arm. Around his waist is a silver sash. Beneath his outer cloak is a another set of clothing. He wears a pair of loose black pants and similar long sleeved black shirt tucked into the gloves. Over the shirt he wears a white, tight, high collared tunic vest that splits at the waist and ends at the knees. It is simlar to a basic Quincy uniform but. Condensed to fit beneath his shinigami uniform. The only portion of this uniform visible is the vest and collar at the V neck. The ends of the collar bear a black number twelve in japanese as well as the back of the vest. Instead of clogs or sandals he wears a pair of white, very light weight, mid-calf boots. Everything about him is very prim and clean. He moves with grace. His posture is relaxed yet rigid.

Personality: Fuecid is Calm, collected and cold. He can be kind but is very analytical and so can appear impersonal. He is extremely intelligent and never shows signs of anger or frustration.

Fuecid is devoted to the causes he believes in. He views misconduct and disorderliness as signs of weakness and/or lack of faith in ones cause. He is eloquent and controlled and carries himself like a noble. Lastly he is wise and therefore not terribly arrogant.

Biography: Fuecid carries vauge memory of his life as a mortal. Hhe was a noble and heir of his powerful family in late 18th century England. He was brought up to be perfect and exemplify all the traits of a young noble. Manners, strength, knowledge, insight, etc.

Upon turning the age of 13 his Father revealed that the Wynala family were Quincy. The family was one of the first Quincy families and his father held a position on the Quincy council of elders.

Fuecid devoted himself to the Quincy cause and mastery of their art. By the age of 23 he was being reviewed to become an elder. He would have been the youngest in history. Then the Quincy/Shinigami war broke out. In his final battle Fuecid witnessed his comrades’ souls devoured by hollows as the Shinigami stood by and allowed it. When Fuecid fell however he did not go to Hueco Mundo. Before he was devoured a mysterious Shinigami thrust their hilt into him sending him to Soul Society. To this day he does not know the identity of that shinigami.

In SS, Fuecid went into hiding in the forests away from Rukongai. There he remained studying the Shinigami and thinking of a way he could sabotage them and aid the Quincy. He performed a few acts and became an outlaw. When he learned of the Quincy’a he preoccupied himself with remaining in solitude and thinking on the past and the Shinigami’s motives and ideology.

Division: 12th division

Zanpakutou appearance: The zanpaktou's sheath is held at Fuecid's left side by being passed through the sash.

When fighting with his zanpaktou Fuecid will fight using speed and centripetal force rather than strength because he will slash quickly and often spin to give hits greater force.

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Sample Mission

“Another group is after me. This one appears to be somewhat intelligent. I may have to use my traps." Thinks Fuecid Wynala as he flitted through the forest with ease. The sounds of pursuit could be heard in the distance. Fuecid made his way to an outcropping of rock and waited. A few Shinigami appeared through the trees and surrounded the pile of boulders. One stepped foreword.

“Halt. We have you surrounded and escape is hopeless. Please come peaceably or we will have to use force.”

Fuecid looks down at the shinigami and says calmly.

“I’m sorry but I must respectably decline your offer. I will remain here.”

The Shinigami motioned and the others moved in, zanpaktous at the ready. Then the leader attempted to shunpo next to Fuecid. Fuecid saw it coming, released a drop of liquid onto the boulders, and hirenkyakued into the nearby forest. Upon impact the boulder reacted and began a chain reaction with those below it. The rocks melted seeping around the shinigami and then solidified locking them in place. Fuecid, seeing his trap succeed, turned and made his way deeper into the forest.

“Foolish shinigami, How could the Quincy ever be defeated by them?”

As Fuecid made his way through the forest he noticed that it had grown suspiciously quiet. He began to move with more caution as he traversed the brambles and undergrowth of the forest. Never once did one briar or thorn catch him or speck of dirt smear for he moved with impeccable precision, moving quickly yet carefully. As he neared his next trap he felt a short pulse of reiatsu. Fuecid paused began to muse over what he just felt.

“Someone is hiding their presence from me. Why did they let that pulse slip? Are they inexperienced? Or perhaps it was done on purpose to lead me astray. This individual may be in a command position and gave the order to the Shinigami to hold back. I have two choices really, continue to the next trap or, move away from my planned course and take on the unknown of what is to come. I shall continue. This person most likely wanted to lead me off course on purpose.”

Fuecid continued on his course moving quickly. More cautious than ever, he hid his reiatsu to an even greater extant to prevent detection while remaining focused on sensing any sign of danger. He came upon a clearing with a small pond in the middle.

“Here it is. This is also where I sensed the pulse.”

Fuecid walked surreptitiously to the pond. He was about to set foot into the water but before touching it he stopped. A thought ran through his head.

“Behind Me….”

Suddenly A shinigami appeared behind Fuecid. Her zanpaktou across Fuecid’s throat. Strangely she said nothing. Nor did she move. Fuecid brought his hand forward revealing a needled syringe. The shinigami collapsed.

“Injected her just in time. It appears that she was the one who emitted the pulse earlier based off the burst I felt as she shunpoed. Or perhaps not…… I must remain vigilant. Time to prepare the trap.”

Fuecid walked into the shallow pool of water and released his reiatsu. Then he slowly sunk underneath. Mirrors revealed themselves inside the pool and created an illusion of Fuecid standing upon the water. A team of four shinigami walked over to the pool blades at the ready. One stepped forward.

“We are here to bring you an offer. If you refuse, we are under orders to capture or kill you.”

The illusion said nothing and a look of frustration came across the shinigami’s face

“Very well then I will take that response as a no.”

The illusion calmly brought up his hand and beckoned the shinigami forward confidently. At that gesture the shinigami grew nervous and hesitated to act. The leader in frustration charged forward and the others followed his lead. As they plunged into the pool their legs froze in place as the water turned instantly to ice. Strangely however, there was a layer of water still around Fuecid. Suddenly the water around the illusion burst into flames and enveloped it. When it died down the illusion was gone. Oil on top of the water burned away. The shinigami began to break themselves free from the ice.

One of the Shinigami spoke, “Where did the body go? Is he dead? I guess we should report this as suicide.”

The leader replied, “That man unnerved me. I’ll take your suggestion.” The shinigami then returned to the forest making their way back to the seireitei.

Fuecid opened a hatch in the forest and left the tunnel that lead under the pool.

“Most excellent, now I will be reported as dead and perhaps have some peace for the next hundred years.”

A voice behind Fuecid speaks calmly, “Those traps you employed where impressive. Excellent use of science in my opinion.”

Fuecid whirled around to see a shinigami standing calmly behind him zanpaktou sheathed. This one wore a badge on his bicep.

The shinigami says, "I am the vice- captain of squad 12 of the Gotei 13. It is my pleasure to make your acquaintance.”

Fuecid thinks to himself, “A Vice-Captain! This is beyond me. He seems cordial enough. I suppose I should hear him out.”

Fuecid says to the vice-captain “I was once known as Fuecid Wynala. Now I am referred to as the ghost of the Quincy by the citizens of Soul Society. Now that I have introduced myself would you please inform of your intentions.”

The vice-captain replies, “I am here to simply recruit you. I wish you to join the shinigami and eventually my division. I seek to understand and better relations with the Quincy. I believe you could be crucial in that endeavor. You may not know this but the Quincy exist yet again in the living world. “

Fuecids thoughts race through his mind, “The Quincy have returned. I know the Shinigami had a just cause to try and bring about the Quincy’s extinction and I have forgiven them. This shinigami’s offer is attractive. No more hiding, no more running.”

The soul says,” You have swayed me. I accept.” [/QUOTE]

[Quincyboy]

NOTE TO BARPG STAFF

I had to post two applications to make the character limit work. I realize that I should have done app then sample mission but I cut appearance in one and zanpaktou in another. I would fix it but I can't copy and paste with the device Im using. I hope what I did is okay. Its all there you'll just have to scroll down a page.

When you put my app in the junior shinigami app section it would be great if someone could organize it correctly for me. It would be a quick and easy task. I would but my device is incapable of storing documents or copying and pasting.

Thank you for your mercy and patience when dealing with me. I'm terribly sorry about all my apps problems.

Sincerely

Kyuubi (Quincyboy)

[alannacho]

Okay, I want to know if this is what you mean by cut and pasting your application correctly. Please read over it. Also, your application is not limited to one post. If your application and sample mission require two separate posts, then you are free to do so.

Name: Fuecid Wynala

Age: Age at Death 23
Age in Soul Society 736

Appearance: Fuecid appears to have aged seven years for every one-hundred, giving him the appearance of one in his early thirties. As a mortal, Fuecid was an English Nobleman, and he carries himself as such even after death. He stands 6'4'' in height, with a slim and athletic build.

His hair is three feet in length and white-blond. He keeps it straight and well groomed at all times. Fuecid's facial features could be described as, Strong jawed and angular yet radiant and somewhat feminine, possessing what could be described as a terrible beauty. The most prominent feature of his face are his eyes. They are a stunning deep blue and many have said when gazing upon them that its as if they were being pulled into an ocean.*

His shinigami uniform is slim and doesn’t billow excessively. He wears a pair of white gloves that end at mid fore arm. Around his waist is a silver sash. Beneath his outer cloak is a another set of clothing. He wears a pair of loose black pants and similar long sleeved black shirt tucked into the gloves. Over the shirt he wears a white, tight, high collared tunic vest that splits at the waist and ends at the knees. It is similar to a basic Quincy uniform but. Condensed to fit beneath his shinigami uniform. The only portion of this uniform visible is the vest and collar at the V neck. The ends of the collar bear a black number twelve in Japanese as well as the back of the vest. Instead of clogs or sandals he wears a pair of white, very light weight, mid-calf boots. Everything about him is very prim and clean. He moves with grace. His posture is relaxed yet rigid.

Personality: Fuecid is Calm, collected and cold. He can be kind but is very analytical and so can appear impersonal. He is extremely intelligent and never shows signs of anger or frustration.

Fuecid is devoted to the causes he believes in. He views misconduct and disorderliness as signs of weakness and/or lack of faith in ones cause. He is eloquent and controlled and carries himself like a noble. Lastly he is wise and therefore not terribly arrogant.

Biography: Fuecid carries vague memory of his life as a mortal. He was a noble and heir of his powerful family in late 18th century England. He was brought up to be perfect and exemplify all the traits of a young noble. Manners, strength, knowledge, insight, etc.

Upon turning the age of 13 his Father revealed that the Wynala family were Quincy. The family was one of the first Quincy families and his father held a position on the Quincy council of elders.

Fuecid devoted himself to the Quincy cause and mastery of their art. By the age of 23 he was being reviewed to become an elder. He would have been the youngest in history. Then the Quincy/Shinigami war broke out. In his final battle Fuecid witnessed his comrades’ souls devoured by hollows as the Shinigami stood by and allowed it. When Fuecid fell however he did not go to Hueco Mundo. Before he was devoured a mysterious Shinigami thrust their hilt into him sending him to Soul Society. To this day he does not know the identity of that shinigami.

In SS, Fuecid went into hiding in the forests away from Rukongai. There he remained studying the Shinigami and thinking of a way he could sabotage them and aid the Quincy. He performed a few acts and became an outlaw. When he learned of the Quincy's he preoccupied himself with remaining in solitude and thinking on the past and the Shinigami’s motives and ideology.

Division: 12th division

Zanpakutou appearance: Fuecid's zanpaktou is shaped like an elongated S with the top and bottom thirds chopped off.. The form gives the impression of a new spring sprout. The sword is 49 & 3/4 inches long, with the blade measuring 24 & 1/8 inches in length.

Hilt- the hilt makes up over half the sword and at the last few inches curves downward completing the lower portion of the S shape. Along the hilt is a spiral platinum vine design. The end of the hilt has a small platinum pommel where the vine design ends. The hilt is steel with black leather wrapping.

Blade- the blade completes the upper half of the S shape and curves as well. it is about 2 inches in height and tapers upward to a point at the end. His zanpaktou's sheath is held at Fuecid's left side by being passed through the sash. It is made of black leather with Platinum leaf design.

When fighting with his zanpaktou Fuecid will fight using speed and centripetal force rather than strength because he will slash quickly and often spin to give hits greater force.

[alannacho]

As I said before, separate posts are allowed for application and sample mission.

Sample Mission"
“Another group is after me. This one appears to be somewhat intelligent. I may have to use my traps." Thinks Fuecid Wynala as he flitted through the forest with ease. The sounds of pursuit could be heard in the distance. Fuecid made his way to an outcropping of rock and waited. A few Shinigami appeared through the trees and surrounded the pile of boulders. One stepped foreword.

“Halt. We have you surrounded and escape is hopeless. Please come peaceably or we will have to use force.”

Fuecid looks down at the shinigami and says calmly.

“I’m sorry but I must respectably decline your offer. I will remain here.”

The Shinigami motioned and the others moved in, zanpaktous at the ready. Then the leader attempted to shunpo next to Fuecid. Fuecid saw it coming, released a drop of liquid onto the boulders, and hirenkyakued into the nearby forest. Upon impact the boulder reacted and began a chain reaction with those below it. The rocks melted seeping around the shinigami and then solidified locking them in place. Fuecid, seeing his trap succeed, turned and made his way deeper into the forest.

“Foolish shinigami, How could the Quincy ever be defeated by them?”

As Fuecid made his way through the forest he noticed that it had grown suspiciously quiet. He began to move with more caution as he traversed the brambles and undergrowth of the forest. Never once did one briar or thorn catch him or speck of dirt smear for he moved with impeccable precision, moving quickly yet carefully. As he neared his next trap he felt a short pulse of reiatsu. Fuecid paused began to muse over what he just felt.

“Someone is hiding their presence from me. Why did they let that pulse slip? Are they inexperienced? Or perhaps it was done on purpose to lead me astray. This individual may be in a command position and gave the order to the Shinigami to hold back. I have two choices really, continue to the next trap or, move away from my planned course and take on the unknown of what is to come. I shall continue. This person most likely wanted to lead me off course on purpose.”

Fuecid continued on his course moving quickly. More cautious than ever, he hid his reiatsu to an even greater extant to prevent detection while remaining focused on sensing any sign of danger. He came upon a clearing with a small pond in the middle.

“Here it is. This is also where I sensed the pulse.”

Fuecid walked surreptitiously to the pond. He was about to set foot into the water but before touching it he stopped. A thought ran through his head.

“Behind Me….”

Suddenly A shinigami appeared behind Fuecid. Her zanpaktou across Fuecid’s throat. Strangely she said nothing. Nor did she move. Fuecid brought his hand forward revealing a needled syringe. The shinigami collapsed.

“Injected her just in time. It appears that she was the one who emitted the pulse earlier based off the burst I felt as she shunpoed. Or perhaps not…… I must remain vigilant. Time to prepare the trap.”

Fuecid walked into the shallow pool of water and released his reiatsu. Then he slowly sunk underneath. Mirrors revealed themselves inside the pool and created an illusion of Fuecid standing upon the water. A team of four shinigami walked over to the pool blades at the ready. One stepped forward.

“We are here to bring you an offer. If you refuse, we are under orders to capture or kill you.”

The illusion said nothing and a look of frustration came across the shinigami’s face

“Very well then I will take that response as a no.”

The illusion calmly brought up his hand and beckoned the shinigami forward confidently. At that gesture the shinigami grew nervous and hesitated to act. The leader in frustration charged forward and the others followed his lead. As they plunged into the pool their legs froze in place as the water turned instantly to ice. Strangely however, there was a layer of water still around Fuecid. Suddenly the water around the illusion burst into flames and enveloped it. When it died down the illusion was gone. Oil on top of the water burned away. The shinigami began to break themselves free from the ice.

One of the Shinigami spoke, “Where did the body go? Is he dead? I guess we should report this as suicide.”

The leader replied, “That man unnerved me. I’ll take your suggestion.” The shinigami then returned to the forest making their way back to the seireitei.

Fuecid opened a hatch in the forest and left the tunnel that lead under the pool.

“Most excellent, now I will be reported as dead and perhaps have some peace for the next hundred years.”

A voice behind Fuecid speaks calmly, “Those traps you employed where impressive. Excellent use of science in my opinion.”

Fuecid whirled around to see a shinigami standing calmly behind him zanpaktou sheathed. This one wore a badge on his bicep.

The shinigami says, "I am the vice- captain of squad 12 of the Gotei 13. It is my pleasure to make your acquaintance.”

Fuecid thinks to himself, “A Vice-Captain! This is beyond me. He seems cordial enough. I suppose I should hear him out.”

Fuecid says to the vice-captain “I was once known as Fuecid Wynala. Now I am referred to as the ghost of the Quincy by the citizens of Soul Society. Now that I have introduced myself would you please inform of your intentions.”

The vice-captain replies, “I am here to simply recruit you. I wish you to join the shinigami and eventually my division. I seek to understand and better relations with the Quincy. I believe you could be crucial in that endeavor. You may not know this but the Quincy exist yet again in the living world. “

Fuecids thoughts race through his mind, “The Quincy have returned. I know the Shinigami had a just cause to try and bring about the Quincy’s extinction and I have forgiven them. This shinigami’s offer is attractive. No more hiding, no more running.”

The soul says,” You have swayed me. I accept.”

Now that I have done this for you, it's time for me to critique. Please read over both posts carefully. You have multiple punctuation errors as well as capitalization errors in both your application and sample mission. If you have access to a laptop or desktop computer, please use them to correct the errors as well as copy and pasting and then posting the application and sample mission correctly. While I do not mind helping out with copying and pasting, you will need access to that ability when you begin to write and post your missions should you be accepted.

[Ultranator]

What are you using to write these that doesn't let you cu and paste, or store documents? I can tell you now, that you're going to have a heck of a time writing missions if you have to do it all in forums. Not only is it dificult to sit down and write missions in one sitting, but you'll loose the ability to be able to check your spelling and grammar.

[Quincyboy]

I have realized this and Ive decided to withdraw my application. Please dont delete it though. Archive It.......whatever. In August I should be able to obtain a laptop.

I was so excited about the BARPG that I forgot that all I had was an I Touch to use.

[alannacho]

I will close the thread for now. When you are read to apply once more, please send me a pm, and I'll reopen the thread.