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Xemorus
10-02-2008, 01:09 AM
Name:
烏 鈴木
Karasu Suzuki

Gender:
Male

Age:
18 years old at the time of death

99 years old in Soul Society

Appearane:
Karasu stands at 1.78m and weighs 69kg. He is most noted for being extremely attractive and uses his great looks to flatter people which more times than not he is unaware of how influential his looks can be. He is well built for his appearance, and moves quickly on his feet.

He has straight brownish red hair. The back of his hair is layered, and reaches the base of his neck while the length of his bangs reaches down to his nose and covers his right eye. Karasu has midnight blue eyes with a deep green ring around each of his pupil. He has light skin, but almost never burns in the sunlight. His body has no scars or foreign marks on it. Karasu wears the standard issued Shinigami shihakushou with no adornments or alterations to it at all.

Personality:
Karasu is an unmotivated individual and hates to do anything that he considers to be boring or repetitive, but when something catches his attention he is ready to complete whatever it is that thing may be. He has a warm personality, and his friendly to everyone who comes in contact with him. He is also a playful flirt when he is graced by the company of women. He can be easily persuaded by women, and bribed with chocolate.

Karasu is a tactician by nature, and enjoys creating and executing his plans. He is extremely loyal to his friends and his allies, but to his adversaries and the people he find annoying he is emotionless toward. He can never turn down a challenge, and will go through any obstacle to complete them.

It is impossible to anger him using words; however, he is infuriated at the sight of harassment and abuse. He also dislikes the color orange and most insects.

Biography:
Karasu had no recollection of anything from his former life as a human, his former life as a hollow, an even his own real name. He had been found unconscious by a small girl who happened to be wondering around the woods of the 69th district. She was the one who gave him his name and led him to the small village she lived in; however, the villagers were already cautious due to the bandits which had been raiding nearby villages, and didn’t trust Karasu at all. The villagers had sent for a Shinigami to come and aid them; however, they had not received any word from him yet, and were getting worried.

To help the young girl for her help earlier, and giving him a name, Karasu developed a plan which would eliminate the bandits while keeping everyone in the village safe. With the help of the villagers who were starting to trust him they gathered enough wood to execute the plan. To make sure that they would have enough supplies Karasu left the village on his own to gather some more supplies while the rest of the villagers began to work on the plan when the bandits shot him with arrows before proceeding to raid the village. The bandits attacked relentlessly; however, the villagers were prepared, and from holes within the wall impaled the majority of the bandits using wooden spikes before Karasu and a group of the village men appeared and pierced the bandit leader’s throat along with the remaining bandits with a volley of arrows. The Shinigami the village sent for arrives behind Karasu and the men, and the two vanish while the village celebrates.

In Daikokubashira Academy Karasu quickly excelled at the arts of kido, in particular the art of bakudo. He was also well liked by the rest of his classmates along with all of his teachers. He quickly rose to the top of his class not only in the academic area, but also in the combat area using well developed strategies for combat practice, and the use of bakudo and hohou to allow his teammates to force the opponents into submission.

Division applying to:
9th Division

Zanpakuto appearance:
Like most other shinigami Karasu’s zanpakuto in its sealed form is a standard issue katana. The katana is 100cm long from its hilt to the tip of its blade. The hilt itself is 25 cm long, and gray in color. A decorative pure white silk ribbon wraps around the hilt of the zanpakuto. The guard of the zanpakuto is silver and decorated. On the outside of the guard are small roses that go all around the guard. On each side of the blade is a large bell pointed away from the blade. The blade itself is 75cm long and pure white and it’s shaped like a normal katana’s blade.

Xemorus
10-02-2008, 01:17 AM
Sample Mission:

ooc: First Shinigami's speech is in dark red, Karasu's spech is in silver, Girl's speech is in magenta, Villager's speech is in blue, Bandit's speech is in green, Second Shinigami's speech is in red, and italics are thoughts

Blood flowed freely from Cain’s wounds as he moved back into a defensive position. His body in agonizing pain, as his shinigami opponent was already in front of him and had sliced into Cain’s upper leg once again. There was an audible snapping sound followed by immense pain that ran down his body as the blade severed Cain’s right triceps, forcing him into a kneeling position. Slowly the shinigami stepped forward while keeping his pale blue eyes fixed on Cain, his silver blade gleaming underneath the crescent moon. As the shinigami took another step forward Cain quickly swiped at the shinigami with his venomous claws. Cain ripped through the still air and looked around for the powerful shinigami while trying to get back up to a defensive position before a quiet voice from behind him stunned him.

“That will not work hollow. You have lost.”

Cain howled with pain as the shinigami’s silver blade sliced through his left triceps, forcing him to take a degrading bowing position while the shinigami slowly walked in front of the fallen hollow with his blade slowly slicing through the sand.

“You made a valiant attempt hollow; however, this battle is over. The next time we meet you will not recognize me.”

Cain snarled at the shinigami before his body started to feel heavy and numb. The feeling of the sand between his claws and the sound of the wind blowing steadily vanished. Darkness slowly engulfed Cain until everything vanished and he was alone.

Then there was nothing.

“Hey…hey you wake up already,” said a small voice somewhere near.

“Wha…where am I?”

“Hey….stop lying there and get up or I won’t stop poking you with this stick,” said the voice again this time followed by a slow jab to his stomach.

He slowly opened his eyes to see a young girl, who was now smiling and jumping up and down in glee.

“What’s your name, sleepyhead?”

He stared at the strange girl for a few seconds before she finally understood what he was thinking.

“Oh…you don’t have a name do you. Hmmm well let’s see I’ll call you Karasu and you can have my last name too so your new name is Karasu Suzuki,” said the little girl happily as she sat back down.

“Karasu Suzuki…I like that,” Karasu said while he looked around at the foreign land.

“Come on I’ll take you to the village. It’s not safe to lay around here all alone,” said the girl pulling his arm upward trying to get him up.

Karasu carefully analyzed everything while the little girl guided him through the woods and across a shallow lake. A small town slowly appeared over the horizon. As Karasu was lead closer he could see a wall made out of wood, which surrounded the small town. The little girl quickly ran up to the wall and knocked on it. A small portion of the wall was lifted and two piercing grey eyes peered at the little girl then at Karasu. With a nod from the girl the wall slowly swung open and he was dragged into the barricaded town. As he entered, Karasu could feel the eyes of everyone in the village fixed on him, but still the little girl pulled him to follow her until she suddenly stopped.

“This is the 69th district in the Rukongai. There are a lot of bandits around here so everyone is jumpy especially since a neighboring village was just destroyed, and we sent someone to enlist the aid of the Seireitei, but he hasn’t come back yet,” explained the small girl.

Karasu slowly stepped away from the girl and walked along the wooden wall while his hand gently brushed against the exterior. He steadily inspected the wall and formulated plans to protect the village just in case bandits did decide to invade.

“How much wood like this do you have, and do you think you could obtain before night falls?” Karasu asked calmly while he gazed at a splinter lodged into his right index finger.

The villagers looked at each other with obvious confusion, and at Karasu with a mixture of curiosity and distrust. He ignored their gazes while plucking out the splinter, and once again continued to walk beside the wall.

“We can get about 70 kilograms if we all work together and put our mind to it. Some of the trees here can get pretty big and we have decent equipment,” said a large man stepping out from the rest of the crowd.

“Then we need to start now. That should be enough,” replied Karasu calmly to the villagers finally leaving his given path and cut through the center of the village to reach the gate he had entered through.

The distrust the villagers felt for him vanished in an instant, but the feeling of confusion resonated from each villager as they watched this unknown helper open the gate, while some of the village men returned with some enough tools for everyone to work. Karasu picked up his tools and lead the villagers into the depths of the woods. He steadily lead the villagers through the woods using the same path the girl had taken him along until they all stood amidst a large tree in the woods. He looked back to ensure himself that the village was still visible from their current location before he instructed the men to begin chopping down the tree.

Hours passed, and the men continued to work on cutting, shaping, and transporting the pieces of wood from the fallen tree to the village. Each of the men was drenched with sweat by the time the sun had sunk beneath the trees. Karasu lead the men back to the village with the last pieces of wood. The gate swung open for them all followed by greetings from the rest of the villagers.

“I’m going to go ahead and check everything to make sure it’s safe. If we can get more supplies then we will stand a better chance of fighting if the bandits do target this village,” said Karasu with a slight smile, a bow in his hand, and some wooden arrows on his back.

He quickly left the village and ran to the same section of the woods he, and the rest of the men had come from. He slowly looked around for any sign of danger and sighed as he put his bow and arrows down to remove the axe that he had kept on his waist. Karasu hummed while he cut a tree much smaller than the one before.

“I should never offer to do manual labor again,” he laughed as he continued to cut deeper and deeper into the tree.

The soft sound of something slicing the air caught Karasu’s attention as four arrows pierced into his back followed by a fifth into his chest. His eyes went wide as he looked up to see the bandits that the villagers had been frightful of before tumbling over. The bandits laughed triumphantly while walking by him, and proceeding to the village.

“So this is the best defense you could muster huh? I guess we’ll just have to hack it down,” mocked one of the bandits.

At once all of the bandits rushed toward the wall and began cutting into it with swords and axes. Pieces of the wall flew everywhere while the bandits ripped deeper into the barrier stopping them, and at once the front row stopped. Wooden spikes pierced through the small holes cut into the wall, and into the bandits’ midsection. The few remaining bandits stared at their fallen comrades stunned before moving back to the one that hadn’t moved yet. He was at a loss for words while the spikes retracted back to the wall before he started laughing.

“Is that it?” he asked with a hint of amusement “If we can’t cut our way down then we’ll burn the wall.”

The leading bandit plunged his spear into the ground, and grabbed his sword and swiped a sword from one of his allies. Feverishly, he rubbed them together creating sparks which fell onto the butt of the spear. A small flame came to life, and quickly began to roar as it grew larger and larger casting a crimson light on the leaders face. He quickly grabbed his flaming spear to attack the wooden palisade. Before he could so much as take a step an arrow pierced through his throat leaving the bandits once again stunned.

“I guess I was supposed to be dead by now right?” asked Karasu from behind the bandits.

His clothes were ripped revealing a makeshift wooden armor underneath his clothes, and beside him were the village men with arrows all aimed at the bandits.

“Game over,” said Karasu emotionlessly as the men released their arrows slaughtering the rest of the bandits in a single volley.

“That was pretty good boy,” said an unfamiliar voice behind Karasu.

Karasu turned his head to see a man draped in black robed with an impressed look on his face, and a sword hanging on his waist. Something about this man seemed familiar to Karasu, but he tossed the feeling aside.

“So would you like to come with me to the Seireitei?” asked the man while looking at the fallen corpses on the battlefield “I’m sure you could make a good shinigami.”

Karasu looked at the celebrating village, and smirked to himself before putting his bow on the ground, and walked beside the man.

Cyclonus_Zaero
10-02-2008, 08:25 AM
The ONLY thing IMO that needs tweaked is a fighting style under Zanpakuto.

blackheartz
10-02-2008, 08:55 AM
We need your stats out too.

Xemorus
10-02-2008, 04:35 PM
Here are my fighting style and my stats

Fighting Style:
Although Karasu prefers to use kidou in order to defeat his opponent when it’s necessary he can use zanjutsu to defend himself. When he is forced to fight using his sword or his hands he will concentrate on defense and counterattacks preferably to the major muscles on the opponent’s arms and legs to weaken the opponents fighting ability and chances to escape.

and

Stats:
Zenrei Gokei: 4141
Reiatsu: 2484
Zanjutsu: 841
Hakuda: 100
Hohou: 1100
Kidou: 2100 (7 slots open/ 2 slots used)

Bakudō 4 Hainawa (Supreme)
Bakudō 9 Geki (Master)

Spirit Link: 3312

Items:

Techniques:

Moptophaha
10-03-2008, 05:05 AM
You spelt hakuda "bakuda" twice in your app, but it doesn't matter all that much...
Other than that, I saw nothing wrong. ^_^;;