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Urahara Monogoto
11-20-2008, 07:36 PM
Name: Nekomyou Aoi

Gender: Male

Age: 33 age of death. 58 in Soul Society.

Appearance: Aoi is a large imposing figure, standing six foot two inches tall with a thick neck and large shoulders. However, apart from apparently the ability carry heavy things long distances, he doesn't appear that strong. His major areas of strength are in his hands, feet and lower legs - displaying manual dexterity and light-footedness. Aoi has thick, black, mildly curly hair that surrounds his head - but only slightly goes past the base of his skull in length. His hair persistently covers his eyes and foreheads despite Aoi brushing it out of his face and behind his ears whenever he has the option. His wide, robust face is adorned by two eyes of different colours that unnervingly brink at opposing intervals. The left is a deep brown with staring power only augmented by the jet black that surrounds it and takes up the center; but is off-put by a bright green eye that appears completely out of place, freckled with dark and brighter green around the edge and iris. Aoi doesn't like this eye.

Aoi does not like the shinigami kimono and has never adapted to it; avoiding wearing it whenever he can in favour of "real clothes". Only when forced does he wear the full kimono - and while working he leaves hanging around his feet showing the "real clothes" beneath it. He has never made any change to his kimono because of his disdain for it, nor shown any pattern wearing "real clothes" other than he never wears green. Aoi thinks there's more than enough green in his eye.

Personality Aoi is a very angry and bitter person and unfortunately he has no idea why. Fortunately though he's spent the last fifteeen years at Soul Society quietly learning to suppress that side of him. He's now getting to grips with exactly who he thinks he is now. He styles himself a pacifist, but loves to fight. he generally thinks of himself as a good and honest person, but he still lies - whether he is 'good' is something that he is yet to discover. What he likes the most however is what some might call dancing - to which replies that he doesn't like dancing. He likes moving through the air with a rhythm unlike music and dance because it is not bound within song or script. And when he does this during battle he combines his two passions and is most happy. Determining Green's personality outside combat and the flow is difficult because he's still working it out himself.

Biography:When Aoi first found himself within Soul Society he was bitter. He didn't know why, nor how he could get rid of the feeling, so he just turned his anger and bitterness towards all those around him. He was utterly unreasonable in his anger and destruction, because he himself did not have a reason. He picked fights wherever he went - winning most of them due partly to his residual spiritual power and mostly because of alot of luck. But it wasn't long before that luck was going to run out. If it wasn't for a shinigami spotting his potential during a fight with another vagrant, his bitter soul would have just continued it's cycle. However luck prevailed for Aoi once more and he was invited to join the Daikokubashira Acamedy. But Aoi was still a bitter and angry soul with no direction. He did arrive at the gates of the Crimson Court two months after this event, for what reason he was not sure. There was just something within him that needed him to go there.

After six years of the Academy's discipline and spiritual guidance, Aoi began to actually want to change his nature. It was a difficult challenge to change one's very nature, especially when you have no idea why you are that way. Aoi spent fifteen years within Soul Society searching for answers. He looked back upon his life in Rukongai and visited the places he viewed as significant, as well as meeting with spiritual mystics who claimed they could see into his soul. He found no answers within his sentimental places - and the mystics only spoke in riddles, talking of darkness and the bitter soul; the soul that he had to destroy, or at least suppress. After many years looking for answers on the outside - Aoi realised that he would only discover answers within himself. Through much searching, the answers still escaped him, but through meditation he was able to suppress the bitterness within him - leaving a blank slate for who he was yet to become.

Division Applying To: 7th Division

Zanpakuto Appearance: Aoi's zanpakuto is approximately 77cm long, blade and hilt combined. The blade is sharply pointed on the end and double-edged, with a width of 3.5 centimetres and length of 70 centimetres. The length and point specialises it in piercing attacks, but despite it's narrow blade it can be used effectively cutting. The hilt is the most intricate and far-extracted part of the weapon; 7cm long, 2cm at the most in thickness, it is cylindricular but grows wider around the middle. It is coloured light gray, with dark indentations that form an endless vine around it. The guard begins with a large ring of metal that looms over the hand from the top starting from the edge of the northern edge of the hilt and leaving the ring at the top and attaching it to the end of the hilt. Within this ring is an oval shield attached to it from all sides, inscribed upon it is a single character that cannot be deciphered. Beyond this a web of other metal strands starting at the guard and reaching the edge of the hilt provide a shield for the hand from the from and the right side. On the edge of the hilt is a fat pommel to balance out the long weapon and which all the strands are attached to.

Aoi does not like to use his zanpakuto when he can. He begun fighting unarmed and whenever he can, he likes to continue fighting that way. His style of combat whenever using any weapon is following the flow of the battle, never to stop moving, always thinking two moves ahead. He likes to use all of his body when he is fighting so his opponent never knows when the attack is coming from. He takes this particular advantage when fighting shinigami - their attack is always coming from their sword. If he can stop their sword with one limb, he can attack them with three others, and his head, and his knees. He also augments his attacks with kidou in a number of ways. He actually powers his attacks with kidou in order to deal more damage - after all, he only has his hands and feet while they have extremely sharp swords - and he randomly uses kidou alongside his attacks to keep his opponent completely unable to predict his next move. Though he is particularly light on his feet, he doesn't rely on this in combat as he generally attacks in such a way that he is off of his feet alot. His style is very, unpredictable and some might say, insane and this is how he overcomes opponent who use more damaging weapons than he does.

When using his zanpakuto, his technique only improves. But he likes to pretend it doesn't; he is partly right. When fighting with just his zanpakuto versus another zanpakuto, he will most likely lose - his style of sword-fighting is also unconventional and not suited to facing weapons like katanas. But when he combines his weapon into his insane style, it only increases the number of possibilities he could act with, especially as he can wield the weapon with either hand. A favourite technique of his using the weapon is to suddenly stop moving while standing upright with his fingers hooked into the web-like guard of his weapon, holding it over his head ready to strike down like a scorpion's tail. With his opponent off-put, and the strength and speed he can strike down with his weapon, it ferrets out weaker opponents quickly.

Urahara Monogoto
11-20-2008, 07:38 PM
Sample Mission:

Aoi awoke when he heard an odd scratching on the door to the room, so rose slightly to attention. Suddenly a black creature that he quickly realised was a cat leapt onto the frame and was actually standing upon it, before it leapt down onto the other side. "Damn, you stupid cat! There was a reason why I shut the door!" Ever since Aoi had started sleeping here, this cat had bothered him every morning, afternoon and evening for some food. At these times every day it had bothered him until he gave it some and even came out looking for him if he was absent at these times. He was bitter, and he was angry, and this cat had bothered him the most since he had come to Rukongai - and yet he could not bring himself to harm it or do anything but say a few harsh words to it.

Aoi and his cat ate before navigating their way out of the ruined house, the room in which he slept in being the only one without serious damage. The bitter soul wandered through the streets of Rukongai, the cat resting on his shoulder. Speaking to no one in particular, Aoi suddenly begun to yap. "You know, I'd love to be a cat...to be able to leap so high and climb just as easily." In his ponderings, he forgot for a few moments the feeling inside that took license of all his actions. At the end of the ruined street was a large opening with a crowd gathered around it surrounding all the entrances to the street, except for the one which Aoi was going towards. In the center of the street stood a man wearing loose cloth, and staring straight at Aoi. But despite all this, the soul continued onwards, oblivious to his surroundings, focusing everything on trying to get to state where there was no anger. In fact, he had walked straight past the man towards the crowd that blocked the exit to the street ahead before he was jogged out of his delirium.

“You!” Aoi turned to the man, who had now drawn a sword from it’s sheath on his back. The cat leapt off his shoulder and ran away from the confrontation. In the past Aoi would have leapt at him just for getting him to notice he was there – but this time he had patience, if only the slightest amount. It was already beginning to run out. “You smashed up my place!” He didn’t bother to respond, he knew what he was going to say. “For that you die!” As the man started charging towards him, Aoi did the same, sliding through his legs stopping just behind him, propping himself up on his hands and swinging his legs round to kick him. The man jumped to dodge his legs and span round in the action, readying his sword. Aoi didn’t have time to get to his feet, otherwise he would have taken advantage of his opponent’s hesitation, instead he rolled backwards and just as he got to his feet he was slashed down his cheek by the tip of his opponent’s sword. He felt the hot blood running down his face as his vision blurred for a moment.

The black cat was rushing through the back alleys of Rukongai, desperately. Through it’s sprint, it found a shinigami and leapt his face, scratching him. The shinigami quickly and over-dramatically drew his zanpakuto and begun to chase the cat, who had gone off in the other direction, back towards the fight. The shinigami aimlessly chased the feline creature all the way to a building that over-looked the fight, and still had not found his nemesis. With a sigh he dropped to sit and begun watching the fight. Aoi had taken two more wounds while the cat was absent. One slash across his left arm, disabling it – and another cut on the front of his right shoulder. The vagrant looked as though he’d been smacked round the mouth, but otherwise was unarmed. They faced each other off, Aoi breathing heavily, his vision beginning to blur and his enemy grinning inanely. The bitter soul charged towards his enemy, who just stood-fast, his weapon ready. Seconds before he reached him, the vagrant begun to swing his blade horizontally – just as he did so Aoi leapt into the air turning his back to his opponent as his feet collided with his chest and the blade swung narrowly under his. Aoi was left standing at the head of his enemy. Instantly he dropped his fist towards opponent, and viciously broke his nose.

The bitter soul lay on the hot sand to catch his breath, bleeding heavily. He closed his eyes, then suddenly opened them as he heard movement on the sand nearby – the vagrant had gotten to his feet, blood covering his face. Just as Aoi tried to rise to a sitting position he was kicked in the back and sent hurtling forwards. When he attempted to turn to meet him the enemy slashed deeply down his shoulder and he yelled out in pain. He was on his knees, blood virtually pouring onto the sand. The vagrant readied his sword to sever Aoi’s head. Suddenly the bitter soul rushed onto his feet and struck his opponent powerfully in the stomach – as he did so there was a bang and a small flash as the vagrant was sent hurtling through the air and across the sand. Aoi began to cheer, covered with blood - but stopped when his enemy got to his feet, spitting blood onto the sand. Aoi looked towards him then malice, before rushing towards him with incredible speed rising up into the air and first striking him with a knee to the chin, before smashing him with his injured left arm through the wall of a nearby building. When Aoi's feet met the sand his knees buckled before he fell to the floor, unconscious.

Aoi awoke on hot sand, staring up at the midday sun. Nothing hurt. He suddenly sat up straight, and saw a shinigami standing over him and a number of people helping the vagrant walk off, seemingly injured to the head. “Pleased to meet you.” The shinigami offered his hand, which Aoi took with confusion and he was helped to his feet. “If you’re wondering, I healed your wounds.” He touched his face and shoulder. They were gone. “Why?” Aoi looked darkly towards the shinigami.
“There is no need for malice. I’m just offering you an invitation to join to Daikokubashira Academy – I watched your fight, and you definitely have potential for power. If I could get your name, I’ll refer that to the Crimson Court and you can come at your leisure.” Aoi didn’t have a real name, he had just decided that he should be called Aoi randomly, as that was his favourite colour.
“Nekomyou Aoi.” The black cat, Aoi.

Cyclonus_Zaero
11-20-2008, 08:41 PM
That's a decent app there. I see only one thing that needs tweaking.

The Bio needs a little more expansion, what kind of events took place in the Academy that changed him, if you wish to elaborate more on it later. Just talk about one thing or just briefly address a series of events.

I normally want more with the Personality, but the way your character flows I will work. So tweak what I said and I'll take another look at it.

-Capt. Cy

Urahara Monogoto
11-20-2008, 09:08 PM
Ok, I've elaborated more on that time. What do you think?