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kioshi-higosha
12-22-2008, 07:01 PM
this is the first draft for my application and i know its far from perfect, but am i at least going in the right direction? any help would greatly be appreciated.

Name: Kioshi Higosha [M]


Age: Age of death: 16 Age in Soul Society: 26

Personality:
Kioshi is an Upbeat, fun-loving young man he values honor, loyalty and respect. He cares deeply for his friends and would go to any lengths to protect them. He is a kind man with a unique perspective on life… and death… he loves the thrill of battle but hates unnecessary conflict. He does not trust easily but has a weak spot for children, He has a strong sense of humor somewhat dry at times, and he enjoys bringing light to difficult situations.

When it comes to battle he is a fierce opponent, His attacks are fast but strong, his ability to overpower his opponents with pure strength all the while remaining graceful is remarkable.
He divides his spare time between training and meditation, he’s always trying to become stronger so that he may protect what ever it is he feels needs his protection.

Is often found joking at serious times, this is his way of coping with difficult situations.



Physical Appearance:
Kioshi is Caucasian stands about five foot, ten inches tall weighs around 200lbs has slightly tanned skin and has a very strong athletic build, he has short dirty blond hair that comes down just above his eyebrows he wears his hair messy as if he never combs it. His face is most accurately described as being of a square shape. His deep hazel eyes are prominent and have a somewhat sad look about them. He has a somewhat strong jaw line and a small but well proportioned nose.

He stands strong and proud with a cold but gentle vibe surrounding him. Probably the most notable feature Kioshi has would be his crooked smile. He wears a standard uniform except for the fact that the sleeves of his uniform are longer than usual stretching down almost to his fingertips. He is often found complaining about the shoes (sandals) he has to wear as part of the uniform.


He’s clean shaven with a small 1 ½ inch scar closely above his left eyebrow. He also has six healed over scars spread across the entirety of his back caused during his life in Real world.


Division: 11th


Zanpakuto:
Overall length: 39''
Blade length: 26''
Handle length: 13''
The handle is wrapped in a crimson red satin cloth with a black cord traditionally wrapped around it. The guard is a tarnished gold, oval shaped with curved cutouts in it. The scabbard is made of hardwood and is tightly wrapped in black leather, near the top of the sheath it is wrapped in the same crimson material and wrapped with a black cord in a criss-cross pattern. The blade is long and skinny about 2’’ wide the blade is very sharp. At the base of the blade near the hilt is an engraved symbol for the phrase “Vanquisher”

He wears his Zanpakuto on the left side of his body pulled slightly towards the front. He holds the sword firm but loosely in his right hand, he wields it fast but strong from an outsider prospective he seems to be a wild fighter swinging recklessly at his opponent but in all actuality he is making very calculated and precise maneuvers.

He likes to cast the appearance of an out of control power crazed warrior when he’s really in deep control of every movement. He often laughs in battle and likes to taunt his opponents, when he stops smiling is when you know his taking you seriously… that is when the true fight begins.

Biography:
Kioshi was always a quiet child kept to him self for the most part, he spent the majority of is teenage years taking care of his sick grandfather, who taught him the importance of honor, loyalty, and respect. His Grandfather also taught him discipline and how to carry him in a fight so that he would be better prepared for the future.

Walking home from the grocery store one night Kioshi saw a group of thugs attacking a young girl, trying to steal her purse. Most people would ignore such an act but his conscience would not allow him too, he shouted at the thugs to leave her alone but his soft voice did not seem to travel the distance. He had no choice but to interfere directly. He fought the thugs and eventually bested them in battle; he had the chance to finish the leader off but bowed out of the fight knowing he had won.

The leader embarrassed pulled out a gun and shot Kioshi in the back six times killing him. As he lay there dying regret filled his heart as the young girl was killed as well for running at the sound the gunshot. His heart ached at the thought of not being able to protect her, even at the cost of his own life.

After his death he awakens standing over a blood-stain on the concrete… this is where he died. Not long after awakening he hears a voice he turns around to see an older man with long black hair tied neatly back in a pony tail, his hair graying on the sides.

“Who are you?”
“I’m a shinigami of course”
“A death god? So you’ve come to take me to hell?”
“Not at all young man… I’ve come to take you Home”

One month later…

“Higo-Chan!! Wake up Higo-Chan!!”
“…Hmm… Where are we?”
“We’re here of course!”
“Who am I?”
“You’re you…”
“Who are you?”
“Well I’m me silly…hurry up higo-chan you don’t want to be late for your first day!”
“My First day?”
“You’re first day at the academy of course, hurry up!”

While in Soul Society Kioshi quickly made friends with some locals in the Rukongai 81st district Most Notably Inimaru a young girl around 14 whom Kioshi has grown to consider a little sister.

And Kohnixander a man around his age roughly 24-26 whom he considers a brother type figure.

Kioshi found himself forced into many battles during his time in the 81st district, one of which pitted him against the self-proclaimed “Fight-King” Anizarou Kushibra.

A battle that proved to be challenging in many ways and nearly ended his existence. If it wasn’t for Kohnixander coming to his aid Kioshi might not be in soul society today, although he would never admit it he was grateful for xander’s help that day.

kioshi-higosha
12-22-2008, 07:01 PM
Sample mission:
“Come on we’re gonna lose him.” Maru said.

“…it’s an open field…where’s he gonna go?” Kioshi said.

“Just come on… we’re losing ground no time to talk.”

Kioshi replied “well maybe we’re losing ground because your legs are so short and not because I’m talking?”

“No I’m almost certain it’s because of your insipid rambling.” Maru said resentfully

Kioshi Replies confused “Insipid? What the hell is that supposed to mean??”

“Never mind we’re almost there.”

“Right” said Kioshi
they started to sprint towards there targets location at an increasing speed.

“These shoes are really uncomfortable” Kioshi said
“There not shoes idiot there sandals!!… and I thought we agreed no talking!”

“Ugh… Whatever…jeez why are you so serious today you’re usually not so uptight it’s just a hollow” Kioshi said
Maru quickly replied
“I am not uptight! And if I’m being serious it’s only because you refuse to take anything serious! And it’s not just a hollow this is your final exam, you’ve failed three times already for not meeting the time requirements”

“Hey at least I killed the targets for those missions… I just had a little trouble finding them is all?”

“If you’d learn to sense Reiatsu you wouldn’t have that problem!” said Maru
Kioshi replied

“I can sense them if I tried… I just choose not too… it makes things more interesting”

“Like I believe that!” Maru said

“Like I care what you believe!”

“Maru suddenly stops running”

“It’s just up ahead, over that hill”

“Got it… Thanks Maru I really appreciate this I know your risking your neck by doing this, if sensei knew you were helping me you’d be suspended” Kioshi said sincerely
“It’s not just my neck on the line here, if you fail this exam you most likely wont get another chance at least not for awhile” Maru replied
“I know… how much time do I have?”

“30 minutes”

“Not a Problem… all I have to do is cut its skull in half… how hard could that be right?” Kioshi Said in a sarcastic tone.

“Well then ill leave it too you, Good luck”

“Hmph… won’t need it…” said Kioshi
Kioshi ran over the hill to find the hollow he had been assigned to eliminate. It was large and muscular with dark brown skin. Its body had many scars of many shapes and sizes, a sign that this beast has been through many battles. Its mask was white with black marking above both eyes the mask resembled that of a serpent its eyes were yellow with a dull red tint to them, His hands are large with large claws 4 on each hand.

“So… you’re the great hollow everyone’s been making such a fuss over.”

The hollow replied in a Deep rasping voice.
“Shinigami? So you’ve come to send me to hell have you?”

“The hollow laughs”

“Kioshi Smiles”

“Hell is such a harsh word… I don’t like it at all. Let’s just say I’m sending you…Home!”

Kioshi springs forth un-sheathing his Zanpakuto taking a wild swing at the hollow. The hollow dodged and took a swipe at the young shinigami, Kioshi quickly moved out of the way. Landing on his feet to the left of the hollow “Kioshi thinks to him” “this could take longer than I thought”
The hollow came at Kioshi fast hitting him hard knocking him 15-feet to the left of where he was standing. Kioshi slides on the ground in pain tearing the ground beneath him asunder.

“Damn… I let my guard down”

“You’re going to have to do better than that if you expect to defeat me Shinigami!” The hollow said in a condescending tone

“Kioshi Laughs”

“Lucky For you I’m just warming up then”

“The Hollow Laughs”

Kioshi leaps forward attacking the Hollow with amazing speed and precision cutting the hollows left arm off and slicing his chest. The hollow counters with his right arm sending Kioshi crashing to the ground, the hollow jumps high in the air and tries to land on him, but Kioshi quickly rolls out of the way. He kips up and swings his Zanpakuto at the beast slicing his back.

The hollow turns and swipes Kioshi with his right hand slicing his right arm knocking him down again, Kioshi rolls forward and spring back onto his feet.



“The Hollow Laughs uncontrollably”

“You’re better than I thought Boy! I’ll give you that…”

“Kioshi Laughs”

“I think you’ll find I’m full of surprises”

Kioshi Charges the beast head on with his Zanpakuto low to his right side blade pointing behind him. He jumps just above the hollow his sword raised high above his head “THIS IS IT!! YOU’RE FINISHED!!!” Kioshi shouted.

“Am I?” said the hollow

Kioshi came down just about to slice the beasts head open when the hollow opened its mouth and spewed forth some sort of venom!! Kioshi dodge the surprise attack as best he could but the venom landed on his left shoulder and began to burn through his uniform like an acid!! He tore the section of clothing off his shoulder before it managed to cause too much damage, but he was still injured.

“A shinigami caught off his guard? Truly a rare sight to behold!”

“Kioshi breaths heavily”

“Take a long hard look hollow…cause you’ll never see it again”

Kioshi grasps his Zanpakuto tightly and charges, the hollow Screams loudly and charges forward he raises his hand and forms a spear with his claws. They meet; the hollow strikes aggressively Kioshi blocks the attack with his Zanpakuto and quickly counters slicing the beast in half. The hollow screams in pain and takes one last swipe at the young shinigami but Kioshi parry’s the attack and slices the hollows skull in half.

“The Battle was over the Vile Hollow was no match for the immense power of Kioshi Higosha!”

*WHAAAAAAAAAM!!!!!!!*
“What the hell do you think your doing talking to yourself at a time like this you’re almost out of time!!? Idiot”

“Ouch!!! Maru what the hell did you have to hit me for!!”

“You’ve only got 10 minutes to get all the way back to the Gate or you fail Dumbass!! Hurry up”

“Right! Lets go… but you didn’t have to hit me so hard, I am injured you know!”

“Don’t be such a wimp those are only flesh wounds ya cry-baby”

“I didn’t say they were bad injures I was just saying show a little compassion sheesh”

“Oh Fine! I’m sorry I hit you Can we please hurry up now?”

“Right! Apology accepted race ya there!”

“Tch…Like you could be me!”

“Fine! Last one there has to run around the academy naked! Five times!” said Kioshi

“Five times? Why not make it ten! You’re on!”

Kioshi and Inimaru Sprinted towards the gate to soul society at great speeds staying neck and neck the whole way.

“Almost there!”

“GOD!! These shoes are uncomfortable as hell!”

“Inimaru sighs”

blankdoor
12-26-2008, 11:46 PM
I have discussed the issues with this application with kioshi-higosha over skype. I now await for the changes to be made then I will re-read and critique once more, thank you.

-Blank

kioshi-higosha
12-30-2008, 05:43 AM
Sample mission:

The young man just appeared, out of the senkaimon which appeared just a few steps away from a large river. Just ahead of the senkaimon is a field thick with trees, it is a nice night in real world. Past the trees is a larger field stretching a few miles, everything is clearly visible in the light of a full moon.

Maru, A young slender women with blond hair and black rimmed glasses stood next to Kioshi., who was at least 2 feet taller than her “we’d better get going, you only have one hour to finish.” Maru said “that’s plenty enough time.” Kioshi replied arrogantly Maru smiled and told Kioshi to get moving, but he just stood there staring off into the distance.

“Why are you just standing there?” Maru said “get going already.” Kioshi stood there silent not moving an inch, almost like a statue. You could barely see him breathe “which way was it again” Kioshi said confused. Maru stood there with a look of anger on her face; it almost appeared as if she were counting back from ten to calm her self down.

“It’s that way” Maru said condescendingly as she pointed to the east over the hill across the field. “Ya… right, I knew that.” Kioshi said as he started walking in the direction Maru was pointing. “Lets go” Kioshi said, Kioshi and Maru started running east through the trees and over the hill. They ran for what seemed like hours but in actuality was only twenty minutes.

“Its there.” Maru said Kioshi and Maru kneeled down squatting behind some bushes concealed in the dark shadows cast by the trees surrounding them. “It’s bigger than I expected.” Kioshi said quietly “scared?” Maru replied, Kioshi lowered his head and sparked an evil grin. Kioshi laughs “scared? Never.” Kioshi looked up at Maru “I just wish xander was here to watch this, Maru Laughs “we both know xander would have already killed it and left by now.” Kioshi sneered at Maru.

“Whatever” Kioshi said irritated as he started to make way through the bushes toward the hollow he had been sent to dispatch. The hollow was large roughly 10 foot tall and muscular with dark brown skin. Its body had many scars of many shapes and sizes, a sign that this beast has been through many battles. Its mask was white with black marking above both eyes the mask resembled that of a serpent its eyes were yellow with a dull red tint to them, His hands are large with large claws 4 on each hand.

“You’re not him” the hollow said in a deep rasping voice. Kioshi approached the hollow with a determined look on his face “and who exactly are you looking for” Kioshi said, the hollow turned to face Kioshi and started to laugh “I want the one with the power…and your not him” Kioshi smiled and stepped forward, meeting the hollow face to face “then who am I?”

The hollow started to laugh as he stepped closer to Kioshi “you? You are nothing more than a child with a sword” Kioshi steps closer to the hollow now eye to eye with the beast.

Kioshi springs forth un-sheathing his Zanpakuto taking a wild swing at the hollow. The hollow dodged and took a swipe at the young shinigami, Kioshi quickly moved out of the way. Landing on his feet to the left of the hollow “Kioshi thinks to him” “this could take longer than I thought” The hollow came at Kioshi fast hitting him hard knocking him 15-feet to the left of where he was standing. Kioshi slides on the ground in pain tearing the ground beneath him asunder.

The Hollow Laughed as Kioshi leaps forward and attacks the Hollow with amazing speed and precision cutting the hollows left arm off and slicing his chest. The hollow counters with his right arm sending Kioshi crashing to the ground, the hollow jumps high in the air and tries to land on him, but Kioshi quickly rolls out of the way. He kips up and swings his Zanpakuto at the beast slicing his back. The hollow turns and swipes Kioshi with his right hand slicing his right arm knocking him down again, Kioshi rolls forward and spring back onto his feet.


“You’re better than I thought Boy! I’ll give you that…” said the hollow
“Kioshi Laughs”as he steps into an attacking position “I think you’ll find I’m full of surprises” Kioshi replied as he charged the beast head on with his Zanpakuto low to his right side blade pointing behind him. He jumps just above the hollow his sword raised high above his head “This is it you're finished!” Kioshi shouted.

Kioshi came down just about to slice the beasts head open when the hollow opened its mouth and spewed forth some sort of venom!! Kioshi dodge the surprise attack as best he could but the venom landed on his left shoulder and began to burn through his uniform like an acid!! He tore the section of clothing off his shoulder before it managed to cause too much damage, but he was still injured.

Kioshi breathed heavily as he stepped back into position. “lets finish this” the hollow said as he stepped into an attacking position “Indeed” said Kioshi said as he grasps his Zanpakuto tightly and charges, the hollow Screams loudly and charges forward he raises his hand and forms a spear with his claws. They meet; the hollow strikes aggressively Kioshi blocks the attack with his Zanpakuto and quickly counters slicing the beast in half. The hollow screams in pain and takes one last swipe at the young shinigami but Kioshi parry’s the attack and slices the hollows skull in half.

Kioshi wipes the blood from his Zanpakuto and returns it to its sheath; the battle was over Kioshi stands over the hollows corpse as it starts to dissolve into spirit particles “what a shame… I forgot to introduce myself” Kioshi said. as Kioshi turned west and started back towards the location of the senkaimon he heard a faint whisper...

blankdoor
01-01-2009, 06:23 PM
After the changes you have made I now think this application is fit to be submitted as a final application good luck.

~Blank