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hidama
01-09-2009, 03:36 PM
Name: Hidama

Gender: Male

Age: (constant spirit) over 3,000 years old (over the course of 8 lives)

Appearance:
Hidama is a Tama-Neko (soul cat) and is rumoured to be one of the original soul reapers which guarded the soul society before it was handed over to the human spirits (this is in fact just a rumour). He stands just under 7 foot tall and wears the traditional Shihakusho but with a long overcoat which has long sleeves which cover his entire arms and hands. He has a pure white scarf around his neck which seems to always blow in the wind. He has a piece of white cloth on his shoulder with the kanji of soul on it. He wears a pair of red skiing goggles on his forehead and has spiky black hair which seems to arc to the left (as you are looking at him) his ears which are cat like, extend from his head at a 45 degree angle. He has blue eyes with the pupils being elongated and pointed like a cats. Hidama’s fur is almost white in colour with golden and black stripes in it. He has a long tail which comes from his lower back and is just long enough to touch the floor and has a muzzle which comes out from his chin and the nose extends to just above the normal height of a normal human nose and apart from these features he is completely human in appearance. Hidama does not have any noticeable scars but many people do wonder what lies underneath the many bandages which are wrapped around his stomach area under his Shihakusho.

Personality:
Hidama is the timid type rarely speaking unless he disagrees with something. His voice is not deep but not high and it sounds very heroic. Hidama is not a physically strong person relying on speed to attack his enemies. Due to the fact the soul society does not trust him anymore his power is severely limited. He does a lot of training which often attracts local people as he has a very unorthodox training method. He spends a lot of his time walking about the rukongai looking into shops but never speaking or buying anything. He often gets people glaring at him and occasionally insulting him but he doesn’t mind as he knows people don’t trust him.

Biography:
When he first came to the soul society he had a power limiting bracelet placed on him which stopped almost all of his soul reaper powers. The bracelet also almost completely stopped Hidama using kidou it was a side effect of the bracelet as it had not been tested. Slowly but surely Hidama’s powers are beening allowed back to him.
Because Hidama just walked into the soul society and didn’t die to come there he was not granted a place in the Rukongai and so until he was allowed into a division he slept under the stars on top of various roofs. After the bracelet was placed on him Hidama has taken to doing more non combat things quite often raking the Zen gardens and walking around the shops in Rukongai. Although he spends more time doing these things he spends most of his time training.

Hidama was once a mighty warrior but the bracelet has severed his connection with his power and his memory. There is one thing he does remember this will be his last life so he chose to die where he was born the soul society.

A tama-neko is created when a human dies protecting an animal if both the animal and human die in the same breath their souls merge and become a tama-neko which alot like a cat has 9 spirit lives. Strangely though whatever animal the human dies with they always become catlike. Hidama was created when he was chosen as a human sacrifice along with a small animal they were both burned alive and drew there last breath together creating Hidama.

Zanpacto appearance:
Hidama’s Zanpacto is a large two handed katana which is about 3 1/2inches wide and 120cm long it is unusual as it has a bright blue blade. Its hilt is shaped like two half crescent moons one pointing towards the grip and one pointing towards the blade which are bright yellow. The grip does not have any fancy embroidery on it instead it has randomly wrapped bandages one of which hangs loose and often blows in the weird wind which flows around Hidama. The sheath is white and is held on by a belt it sits diagonally on Hidama’s back and has a gold bottom and it has a gold kanji for destiny emblazoned on it. The top of the sheath is also wrapped in bandages.

Hidama has a very weird style of fighting he uses his zanpacto in many quick combination slashes never stabbing only slashing. What makes Hidama’s fighting style weird is the way he holds it, he holds it one handed with his arm loose and the blade touching the ground due to the fact the his zanpacto is actually two handed it is very heavy causing Hidama to almost always start with an upwards slash by dropping his sword quickly into his left hand then slicing upwards before bringing it down again into his right hand. Sometimes for a change of pace he holds it in his right hand with the blade on his shoulder and attacks with more downwards strokes. Hidama is a big fan of hand drop techniques in which you add or lose a hand during a strike.

hidama
01-13-2009, 11:23 PM
and the sample mission

Sample mission:
“We have the suspect ryoka in our sights proceeding to capture, over.” The shinigami was watching the suspected ryoka with intent to learn more about him before they captured him. Suddenly the radio flared into life again
“Sir we have a large hollow reading approaching from above us. I don’t know what it is but it sure is big” as he had finished saying it a shadow fell over the wood and over the grove which the ryoka stood
“Sir it’s a menos sir we have a menos incoming” the shinigami on the radio said again
“This isn’t good we may have to abort” The lead shinigami replied into the radio.
“Give it five more minutes and then we abort” this command was followed by a series of yes sirs from the other shinigami. A grinding screech resounded from the menos’s mouth causing all of the shinigami to cover their ears. But still the ryoka stood there.
“Sir the menos is fully on this plane now should we abort” the radio voice asked again.
“No not yet let’s just see what this ryoka does.” The ryoka’s sword clicked in its sheath as he drew it with his right hand letting it fall in front of him craving a piece out of the dirt. He leaned forwards then disappeared into his shunpo appearing just above the menos with his sword above his head then swung it down craving the menos mask in two. As he dropped he tuned to were the shinigami were hiding and said
“Don’t worry I will come quietly you will not need to fight me.” Then used his shunpo again to appear next to the lead shinigami. The lead shinigami did not speak he only released a hell butterfly then opened the senkaimon. The ryoka the shinigami progressed through silently the shinigami flinching every time they heard a click.

The ryoka walked through the streets of the rukongai towards the shinigami headquarters, every eye was on him as he walked people were whispering to each other and all the children stopped playing and stared at him. One man even had the guts to shout out to the ryoka “what monster have you brought into the soul society!” none of the shinigami replied they just kept walking. Eventually they arrived at the first division captain’s house after a brief talk with the guard the lead shinigami told the rest of the team to go back to the barracks and wait for further orders.
“Ryoka you come with me.” The ryoka silently walked into the house being careful to be courteous and remove his shoes at the door.
“1st division captain I have brought the ryoka as you requested.”
“thank you vice captain you are excused” the captain replied the vice captain bowed and left “so what is your name and are you a ryoka” the captain asked but was met by silence “hu hu a quiet one is it well I don’t mind I enjoy the silence” the captain chuckled at the ryoka’s silence to which the ryoka just raised a hand and said
“It’s been a while since I’ve met someone who likes silence like me you must be a very reasonable man.”
“The feeling is mutual” the captain said and chuckled again
“I admire you captain and for that I will tell you who I am” the ryoka said
“I am Hidama the last of the great tama-neko’s and I am not a ryoka I just haven’t been at the soul society in a while I have been in another dimension”
The captains face turned white
“A t, t, tama-neko I thought you had all died.” the captain dropped his head
“I know now that you are definitely not a ryoka but the other soul reapers wont like me just letting you wander completely free hum.....” the captain paused for a second putting his hand to his chin as he thought
“Ah I got it the 12th division captain recently told me of a restraining device a simple bracelet which clamps on to the users arm it limits your powers down. At first we will limit it down to as if you just came out of the academy but as you progress in helping us we will unlock more and more until we can just remove the bracelet altogether”
“Fine I shall wear this bracelet but only as I want to become accepted by you” Hidama replied his feline eyes unwavering in there gaze.
“Good one of my guards will show you the way. Hogosha take Hidama to the 12th division headquarters and tell the captain to use Project Gendo Kane on him. Goodbye Hidama I hope to see you again soon to remove some of that limiter” the captain stood up and bowed to Hidama making most of the guards do a double take Hidama did not say anything only bowing back then turning on the balls of his feet and walking out of the door closely followed by Hogosha.

After they exited the hall Hogosha started walking towards a large complex of buildings far in the distance. It took 10 minutes to get to the complex and it had seemed to have grown a lot larger since then. The tunnels which led into the complex looked like they had seen better days Hogosha walked over and began talking to the guards. A short time later Hogosha walked over to him
“I am sorry I cannot go any further with you I have informed the captain and he will be waiting for you in his lab it’s the building marked with the number four go into the library and walk down to the end and the labs are there.” with that he bowed and left. Hidama began walking towards large three story structure inside the complex. Eventually he arrived at the lab were a man with most of his face tattooed approached him
“Welcome to my humble lab” he said throwing his arms into the air
“I am Cyclonus Zaero 12th division captain I have here the bracelet which will limit your powers now extend the arm you want it on” Hidama lifted his left arm out in front of him as Cyclonus produced a small silver bracelet
“the bracelet will turn invisible once it is put on and only I can make it visible again but I will only do this to take away some of the limits” he said as the bracelet snapped shut. A wave of power shot through Hidama’s mind like a blade cleaving all his power away and storing it in the bracelet. As the roaring sound through his head stopped only a faint whisper inside his head could be heard
“Kidou” the voice said and then faded out of existence as Hidama passed out. He woke up a day later with Cy standing over him
“Ah so your awake” he said joyfully but then turned his head to the side and lowered his eyes
“but the bracelet seems to have separated you from your kidou forever we estimate that you will only be able to use kidou up to no.10 I’m sorry”
“what the hell are you doing in my house get out!” Hidama shouted then passed out.
“Oh great will someone revive him then tell him about this place, he should know who he is but that’s about it so fill him in.”

Cyclonus_Zaero
01-15-2009, 01:42 AM
First of all I’d like to welcome you to the board and tell that this is my first Official post back since my Step-Father died.

Age: You age is too high, you’re character with that kind of age would have some kind of power which wouldn’t be fair to the others. If you want memories from that long ago that isn’t to say it isn’t a reincarnated soul whose memories got retained.

Appearance: Firstly you’re chara can’t be one of the original Soul Reapers, not that you can’t be a Tama-Neko or whatever it is. Also you can’t have anything resembling a Captain’s Haori on, it isn’t only a sign of rank but of power. Now then you can add a bit more to this.. What are the rest of the animalistic qualities you character has, IE what does the muzzle look like? Any scars? Missing teeth? Every little detail you can think of.

Personality:
Personality is good.

Bio:
The bio is too short. I’m a stickler for detail. Flesh it out to at least three paragraphs.

Zanpakuto:
First off you can’t announce the name for your Zanpakuto until you 1,000 SLP, but I don’t really care if you have a name now or not just so long as you character himself doesn’t learn the name until he gets to that point. Also another thing I like in this category is your chara’s fighting style. Add that and you’re golden here.

Sample Mission:
When someone new begins to talk start a new paragraph. At the end of a statement in quotes a coma needs placed in the quotes at the end.

You’re character can’t be strong enough to fight a Menos right out of the gate. All characters start out a 0 ZG, just strong enough to take out a lurking hollow. Also the 1st Div Cappy Isami Mura is a quiet and respectful old man. He wouldn’t treat your character like that.

As for your bracelet if you want to play the angle of reincarnation the bracelet could help you to bring back memories. You can check in the Canteen for the layout of the 12th’s Headquarters.
Adjust your Sample mission to match the hard data and you should be good. Good luck!

hidama
01-15-2009, 11:34 AM
i dont know if this helps maybe i wasnt clear in my original post but the bracelet limits all his powers to that of a shinigami which just came out of the academy and instead of growing in power the bracelet lets some of his power back. i shall also change it to the bracelet trapping his memories and slowly releasing them i hope that solves alot of the issues the ones i didnt address i will think about and edit my post to suit it. I just wanted a character which was out of the ordinary.

also im sorry for your loss it can be hard losing someone close to you

Cyclonus_Zaero
01-15-2009, 09:11 PM
That'll work I suppose; just make the other changes I said. And remember that you can't know that Zanpakuto name just yet.

hidama
01-16-2009, 05:10 PM
no prob il do that i think il follow your advice about reincarnation it adds a nice twist to hidamas background il just edit my orginal posts along with the details about the 1st division captain. oh by the way did i get your personality right i hope i did.

one last thing can i add a picture to affirm hidamas looks
thanks for all the feedback
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there we go all changes made if you spot any more let me know.

Cyclonus_Zaero
01-16-2009, 09:02 PM
You need to work on your puncuation but overall it's pretty solid. Submit the final and you're golden!

hidama
01-16-2009, 09:58 PM
thank you for all your input sorry about punctuation i have dislecsia (see i cant even spell it) so its alot harder for me but il try my best

il so glad i managed to get such an orginal character which is so different to others thanks:D:D