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Tetews
04-17-2009, 01:08 AM
Name:
Seijuro Hiumitsu

Gender:
Male

Age:
Death age: 14
Soul Sociey age:54

Appearance:
1,71cm kg 78.Athletical, strong a little , smart, fast, funny.Good odor,no bad breath,Pleasant,serious a bit and love physical sports,have one scar who initiate in right ear and ends in the nose,Medium blue hair spike type,use glasses, use a red bandana,use two black explosive gloves,his Kimono has longsleeves.His eyes are black,him are Tan,have strong legs,a resistant body,a calm face almost everytime,have one scar in form of X in the left face,not very beatiful because the scars and not very ugly,medium hands,normal nose,medium ears,almost every fight take out the glasses,medium mouth,his tongue are strangely black.Him can use the two hand to make sword attacks.

Personality:
Short fused guy,no stressed,have honor,try to help the ppl,a little bad at sometimes,desire power and have no mercy with enemies.Always trying to do your best.Loves a good battle,favorite color is black,hates joking type persons and is very serious.Sometimes him is cold when him face off someone him hate,when him are pissed off becam troublesome,when he get in Daikokubashira Academy him dont liked to much of kidou,but after sometime him started to try learn it.Love Sleep,eat and wasting time speaking with friend.

Biography:
Him borned in brazil and goes live in japan where him wons the Seijuro Hiumitsu name.Have died in a robber at the bank trying to save girlfriend's life.Came from the 80 district from Rukongai,him have some help of some souls there but him dont liked to be togheter with stranges so him go to the Daikokubashira Academy to seek power because he failed trying to save gf life and she died too,he wants the power to encounter his protect some ppl who him have love and try to find some old friends in rukongai.Have be some troublesome in the academy seeking fight with others students but nothing much,Three fights has happened.He won some two friends in the Daikokubashira Academy,and they tried became shinigami Together.

Division applying to:
13th Division

Zanpakuto appearance:
Its a black Mugenjin its self-sharpening serrated edge flaked away in a regular pattern as it was used and it had become soaked in the reiatsu of the victims he had killed over the years. As a result he is able to execute fire-oriented techniques using the reiatsu as fuel.

Secret Sword 1, Homuradama - This is the technique Seijuro has used the most. Using friction to ignite the human fats that have soaked into his sword over time, this serves to distract the opponent from his swings. The result is being simultaneously burned and slashed, more then compensating for the weakness of his serrated sword not being able to cut as deep as a normal one.

Secret Sword 2, Guren Kaina - He fills his gauntlets with reiatsu, and ignites them with the sparks caused by the Mugenjin. Thus it results in an explosion. Guren Kaina yields a lot of force and is usually performed while his opponent is at close range, preferably in his grip.

Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki: A Hiten Mitsurugi-Ryū battōjutsu that surpasses the speed of the Kuzu-ryūsen. The secret behind the technique lies in an additional step with the left foot which adds instantaneous acceleration and weight to the sword. In addition, if the initial strike is avoided or blocked, the force of the unusually fast slashing motion displaces the air around it, generating a vacuum in its wake and sucking the opponent in; as this happens, the body is spun around for a second strike, with the previous action adding force and momentum to the swing, making the subsequent strike far stronger

This is 3 kinds of styles of fighting.



Sample mission:
The First fight as Shinigami student.

"Wake up idiot!"A feminine voice scream.

"C'mon you are wasting time trying to wake this guy"One hiumitsu friend whisper to the girl.

"AH so is this?Let's see if it work!"The girl saied,and kicked Hiumitsu out of the bed.

"OOOHHH what the hell is happen!?"Hiumitsu wakes very mad and asked.

"Idiot its today! The teacher as send me here to take you guys to the fight test,so take your zanpakutou and came with me."The girl already pissed off said.

"Whats your na.."Seijuro friend tryed to talk but as stopped by Hiumistu.

"Makoto dont ask her name problably she will kill you. hehehe"Hiumitsu maked a joke.

"My name is Ina and no i will not kill him because he asked but i will kill you two if we get later in the TEST!"Ina said.

"Calm down go out let me take my things."Seijuro taked his clothes, the zanpakutou and his glasses and grabed Makoto and get out the room.

"Follow me" Ina said.They passed eleven minutes walking and Seijuro asked"Hell, where is this test?In the earth?"

"Shut up we almost the.."Ina has been stoped by two guy."Hey idiots where you three think you are going?"Guy number 1 saied.

"OH great two punk idiots in our way get out!"Hiumtsu Yelled.

"I know to where they are going Sanada,they are going to the fighting test."The guy number 2 said.

"Ok,let they go Okuno, they gonna lose anyway"Sanada saied,and get out the way of they three,Okuno do the same.Ina,Hiumitsu and Makoto keeping walking and get in a big underground arena.

"Wow so we gonna fight here?"Makoto asked.

"Yes, son is here when the fighting test happen."A old man saied.

"Teacher! I bring they two to the test."Ina said.

"Oh...,My name is Kurama and I the tutor of the fighting test,So boy looks like you use more your sword right?Because in one month in the academy you dont learn even a Sai." Kuruma a little interested said.

"Yeah i dont like kidou much but,Who is my opponent?"Hiumitsu asked animated.

"Okay you go down and your friend gonna up."Kuruma said.

"Why?"Makoto asked."You kid is one kidou type and your friend is the sword type.We have diferent arenas for this"After Kuruma ends the two friend take diferents ways.

"Welcome to the fighting arena,I'm Butso and i not gonna waste time talking take your sword and get ready to fight."Butso said fast.Hiumitsu taked his sword fast and get in position to fight."Who i gonna face?"Asked Seijuro.

"You gonna face...Sanada."Butso said,Sanada came with a longsword."Hahahaha I remember you we meet in out here,get ready to be spanked."Sanada tried to taunt Seijuro.

"Start!"Yelled Butso,at the same time Seijuro Puts the sword back in the sword case and put in position."I gonna finish this with my fast!"Said Seijuro.Sanada came running against him and tried to cut the the Seijuro Right arm."Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki!"Yelled Seijuro doing a strong slash without take any footstep advanced.

"Ugh...."Sanada scrumble.Sanada falls in face of Seijuro with a big cut in the body.

"Calls the 4th squad we have a big injurie here"Butso said."Kid Congratulations you defeat one of our best guys with only one hit."Butso said.

"Thanks but this thecnique takes much energie....."Seijuro falls on the ground.

Sometime later.

"Hey him wake up"Makoto said."Hi idiot how you do such a crazy hit?"Ina said with a mad expressation.

"Hey dont talk with me like that i won!And now its just some more months for me became a Shinigami."Seijuro said.

"Okay but take care and learn KIDO! bye see you later"Ina said walking away of the room.

"I think she likes you"Makoto said.

"O.O dont be crazy! Let me sleep some more"Seijuro said and fall sleep again.


OBS: I'm not much good in english so i hope you can understand the gramatical errors

blankdoor
04-24-2009, 11:16 PM
Though I can see multiple errors in this document I would believe it would be best if you your self went over the document to try and correct your own errors, this would not only improve your grammar, but also think more about your character. Please place a message after you have attempted to do this, if you do not do well, I will then proceed to help you.