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FarShot
04-17-2009, 02:25 AM
Name:
Solar Tenshu

Gender:
Male

Age:
Age at Death: 21
Age At acceptance: 37

Appearance:
Solar Tenshu stands 6'2” tall and weighs approximately 185 pounds with very little fat on him. He also has a large wingspan of 78”. Solar is slightly pale and he has several tattoos from when he was alive in the human world. He has a large Phoenix that covers the majority of his back and it holds a scroll that says Potius mori quam foedare (meaning death before dishonor). A Koi fish on his right thigh, and a snake coiling around his left arm. Scars cover Sol's body from the last moments of his earthly existence, when he was literally tortured to death. His hair is short, straight and of a dark brown color, he also has very dark brown (nearly black) eyes.
He usually has a cold and calm demeanor and seems to be always staring off into space and he rarely shows any emotion on his face except for the occasional laugh or smile when he is relaxed and is at peace. Also, oddly enough, he also has a comical side to him, often making sarcastic comments when they fit in just right. Sol thinks they are funny although most other people think he is a prick when he does come out and crack a joke.
Solar dresses in a sleeveless version of the standard issue shinigami wear with less baggy pants. He also prefers to not wear shoes and if he does, he wears gladiator style sandals. Sol does this to help him relax and move quietly .The most distinguishing part of his outfit is a white eye patch witch commemorates the way he died in the Human World and hides the sight of his empty left eye socket.

Personality:
As said before, Sol carries a cold, calm and cool demeanor and he usually stays that way unless someone acts nice to him for no reason, them he will receive them with an out of place warm smile. Solar treats everyone in the same respect (unless someone did something bad to loose his equal respect) and will always treat everyone in the same candid and honest manner.
He also tends to like to be alone, unless forced to work with someone, and avoids all unneeded contact and awkward situations. This also brings up problems when he is made to work in a group. Sol will let those who are eager to do the work, do the work and he would do the left over assignments. If there are any. On the flip side, Sol is more than ready to do the majority of the work (or all of it) if he finds that his mates are to incompetent to do so or if they are like him and are shy to do so.
Sol is selfless in the regard that he will help pretty much anyone who asks (even if he does not like the other person or does not feel like it). Also he will help anyone he sees that is truly in need of help.
When not on the job Solar acts fairly carefree and loves to lay under the sun or stars and daydream until he passes out. If he is not laying outside he likes to fish, although he rarely catches anything.
Solar hates money and would prefer to have none than a lot and because of this he pays large tips when he eats at restaurants and gives all he can to those who need it. Sol does this because he hates greed and the greedy and because of this he has little or no personal items.

Biography:*
I put this part in a story form, so it was more interesting to write. also it is a bit grotesque in the beginning.

“Where the hell am I,” Sol thought as he shook his, trying to wake up. He looked around, the place was a trashed, dimly lit, empty bar,” Man oh man, I must a gotten smashed last night, I hope it's not tomorrow yet,” The man mumbled out loud. Solar tried to get up, but he just couldn't. He tried several times until he could get the feeling back into his body and even after that, he couldn't. Looking left and right his situation finally hit him. His wrists and and ankles were chained to a pool table.

"Well Mr.Tenshu, I see that you are finally awake," an old voice called out of nowhere," Here let me hit the lights for you, maybe then you will truly realize you situation."

A wave of bright fluorescent light bathed the room in a manufactured white that made Sol cringe at the sudden blindness. "What the hell am I, who the hell are you, let me go!"he demanded.

"Now, now, Mr.Tenshu, then you wouldn't be here for the glorious finale," The man said as he stepped into the light, but Sol still couldn't recognize him.

"What finale? Let me go!" he ordered once again.

"I will not, you dog! You disrespected me and for that, you must pay," the man said with a hint of anger rising in his voice. After a deep breath, he continued on," Besides you have made it this far without dieing, why quit now? Why not just go all the way?!"

"Wha?" Sol said, confused, as he surveyed the area again. He finally lifted his head up to see where the damage was. The were hundreds of designs the were cut into his body with surgical precision and his blood had soaked into the pool table, making a slush sound when ever he moved. It was a miracle he hadn't bled out yet.

"What the? Why are you doing this to me! Ahhhh!" Solar shouted as a wave of pain suddenly washed over him.

"Dogs should pay complete fealty to their owners and you didn't. Besides Mr.Tenshu, you had a chance to redeem yourself but you passed up on that wonderful opportunity, so it really is not my fault that you are going to die today. Now let stage three begin, don't worry, you will definitely die this time, but I'll make sure to make it extra painful for you Mr.Tenshu!" The stranger said with a broad smile creasing his face as he smashed a spike into Sol's lower left tibia.

"Ahhhh," Sol screamed again as he started trashing, trying to get free of his restraints.
"You should really stop shaking, you are only causing yourself more pain", The stranger said as he did the same on the other leg.

"Ahrrggggggg! I'm sorry, I'm sorry sir! I will do anything, just let me go!" Solar screeched.

"No, you already had your chance Mr.Tenshu. Now, time to start on you wrists!" The stranger said gleefully as he smashed spikes threw both of Solars wrists at the same time.

"You're not gonna get away with this!" Solar yelled and he started to cuss and shout insults at the stranger. But that didn't stop the good stranger as he proceeded to throw spikes into Solar's knees and elbows.

"Well now Mr.Tenshu, our time together is running out, do you have any last words, if say them quickly, because you are about exsanguinate!" The stranger said, almost chuckling.

"I am going to come back and kill you, you mother f---" Sol didn't get a chance to finish his last words, the stranger threw one last spike. It went threw Solar's left eye socket and into his brain, killing him instantly.

Solar Tenshu bolted up right just as the spike was piercing his eye, making him stare up at the starry sky above. He had been having that dream virtually every night since he had first arrived at the Soul Society a few years back. he was assigned to one of the lower districts, he didn't remember. He never stayed in one place for very long, since he had become a wanderer since that day. He has been everywhere in the Rukongai, from the ritzy 1st North district to the terrifying 80th south district. He lived off of what ever he could and helped those who needed it, trying to better society. In his spare time all he did was relax in the sun, but that wasn't very often as he was mostly on the move or doing some menial task, but he didn't mind. When he first came to the Rukongai, his left eye didn't come with him, so he was forced to stumble around getting used to the awkward world he now saw, at least his dominant eye remained.

"Well you know what they say," Solar thought to himself," In the land of the blind, the one-eyed man is king..."

Division applying to:*
1st Division

Zanpakuto appearance:*
Sol's Zanpaktou, instead of the standard katana design, is of a sabre design (essentially just a hilt change). The sabre is exactly 35 inches long with a 29 inch blade and a six inch enclosed hilt. His zanpaktou is obviously made for slashing, but it also has a sharpened tip so it can fill the need of a stabbing weapon and if the need arises it has a sharpened upper clip so Sol can perdorm a back cut with his blade.

The Blade and guard part of the hilt on Solar's zanpaktou is made of Damascus steel. The handle is leather wrapped and then has white cloth that hangs about a foot and a half from the top of the handle is wrapped around the leather. The scabbard is made of blackened steel with a gold lion decoration on it.

Sol fights with his Zanpaktou in one hand so he can keep his off hand free to perform other tasks.

FarShot
04-17-2009, 02:27 AM
Sample mission: The First Day

"Hey, hey you, wake up already! It's almost noon!" A feminine voice called out.
Sol's eye fluttered open at the sudden disturbance and saw a girl leaning over him. He had fallen asleep underneath a tree the previous night and it must have been so nice he just didn't wake up. “What do you want?” Replied sol as he stretched his arms and cracked his back.

“You don't remember!? We applied at the Daikokushibara Academy together and today is the first day of class!” The girl answered.

“Oh really? Well I suppose we go then, you know you shouldn't waste time when it comes to things like this,” Solar said flatly as he yawned.

“Time! You're the on that is wasting time here!” The girl yelled back,” Now come you sloth, you should be glad that I stopped and woke you!”

“OK, OK, no need to be loud,” Solar calmly said as he started to walk beside her,” So if you are miss on time, then why are you late as well?”

“Well..uh..um, I slept in too.” the girl mumbled,” But not as much as you! Now come on we have to hurry!” the girl said as she started to run.

“Whoa there, no need to rush. The academy is only a half a mile away, we can walk there in good time! Besides we will make an impression if we get there late,” Solar said.

“Yeah, a bad one...whatever lets walk...” The girl pouted.

“...I apologize but I do not remember your name miss can you tell me ?” Sol questioned.

“ What the hell! You are like a cold, dumb, turtle.... It's Izumi and do NOT forget it this time, I swear it's the fourth time I've told you!” Izumi ordered Sol as she punched him in the arm.

“Heh, well I think I'll call you Iz then,” Sol chuckled as a grin creased his face.

“You said that last time too...”, Izumi mumbled.
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The two managed to make their way into the Daikokushibara Academy exactly as the clock struck noon, they were effectively four hours late...

“Excuse me sir, do you know where we are supposed to go, we are new students here?” Izumi asked an older man that was manning the front desk at the academy.

“Wow, you guys are late! I don't think I ever seen some new students get here this late... well I guess I could help you kids out. What are your names?” The old man replied.

“Oh thank you so much sir! Um, my name is Izumi and his name is Solar Tenshu,” Iz said.

“Oh no problem miss, now lets see what class you are in Mr.Akihiro's class his room is 11b. He is a hard teacher but a good one. He will mold you into fine shinigami, who arrive on time!” The man exclaimed.

“Thank you again sir!” Iz said after she bowed and sprinted down the hall way.

Solar gave a friendly nod and smile as he strolled after Izumi.

By the time Solar arrived at the classroom door the teacher was already finished yelling at Izumi for being so horribly late.

“Ugh, the other one! Well I'm not gonna yell the same things I just yelled again... well I presume that you are Solar Tenshu right?” The teacher said in an aggravated tone.

Sol nodded and smiled again.

“Well Mr.Quiet, take a seat and you will make up the four hours of introduction you just missed!” The teacher ordered.

And at that word, Solar took his seat in the back next to Izumi who had slide far down into her desk as she tried to hide from the eyes of her classmates. After he took his seat, the class continued on as if nothing had happened. Mr.Akihiro continued on with his lesson for another hour and a half, talking about the students future and what types of lessons they will be experiencing.

“...As you know, you will be living here at the Academy until you fail, quit or actual join the ranks of the Shinigami, so go to your respective dormitories and set yourselves up for a long stay. You have the rest of the day off, I expect you back here in the classroom at the same time tomorrow mourning. You are dismissed. Oh and before I forget Solar Tenshu, I expect you to make up eight hours of class time since you were ultimately the last student to arrive today. Meet me back here in 1 hour.

“Yes sensei.” Solar replied with a slight bow of his head.

Taking his time once again, Sol arrived at his dorm room after his room mates already left to explore the Academy. The dorm was small and held four bunks with very little space for personal items, but that was OK since he really didn't own anything besides the clothes on his back. Solar took the remaining bunk, it was the bottom. But that didn't matter to him, he was planning to sleep outside anyways, at least he had a dry place to sleep for when it rains or snows.

Noticing he still had approximately a half hour left until his meeting with his teacher he decided to wander the cramped halls of the Academy and day dream. He found where the cafeteria was, where the bathrooms were and he found several training areas. He slowly wandered his way back the classroom...he was ten minutes late.

“Hello again teacher, you wanted me to hang around for eight hours?” Sol asked.

“Eight hours and ten minutes kid, you are late everywhere you go aren't you? Mr.Akihiro retorted.

“No sensei, I just like to take my time when first visiting new places, to memorize where everything is, so I am only late once,” Solar said.

“Well then, how should I punish you? I know a looser like you doesn't have to be any where in the next eight hours....hmmm.” Mr.Akihiro said in deep thought,” I'm gonna make sweat to death eye patch! I want you to run 20 laps around the academy and you will do the same every day you are late for class.”

“Yes sensei,” Solar said as he bowed.

Solar ran those 20 laps 700 times, it was one of his odd jokes.

blankdoor
04-24-2009, 11:02 PM
Well I see no inherent problem, just please be more accurate with you use of capitalization, as shown here:

...ahhhhhhhhhhHH!"

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHH,"

Please make this grammatically correct and your app will be more than ready for submission, sorry for the wait.