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byyakuya20
10-18-2009, 09:33 PM
Name: Dark shadou Dantes

Gender:Male

Age:Death:15 age*
Age in SS:26*

Appearance:
Dark is 6'1 slim yet toned in muscle size. He has pale white skin with snow white hair. He has light blue eyes which sometimes change into gray or green. He lacks facial hair. His hair is spikey and stands up with two locks fall down from his forhead almost to his nose. He is clean always looking sharp. He always where's black and has several tatoos on his shoulders back and chest.

Personality: Dark is a serious character. He doesn't *speak much but he's commited to reaching his goal in a mission no matter what's the cost. He is always by himself never with others. Most might thing he is anti social. His Dark and mysterious ways makes him an attraction to girls which he ignores and hate from men. He cares nothing for the superficial things he believes he is here for one reason and only that reason. To bring death to anyone who opposes the rules.

Biography:*
Dark was born in the rukongai his life once his eyes open was hell. He was by himself from the beggining. He had no home nor food. He survived only by stealing and working for food. His life changed one day when a woman took him in. She was very kind and shared her shelter and small amount of food to him. He was very happy and started to get friends. Till one cold night a man broke into the house. Terrified the woman put Dark in a closet to hide him. *Hours later Dark exits the closet to find the womans body dead. Dark was blammed for it all and was treated with beatings and painful punishments. In order to escape all of this he left that part of rukongai and lived on his own again. Years later he applied for the academy.

Division applying to:*
11th division

Zanpakuto appearance:*
What does your zanpakuto look like? It is long and white with a shade black at the edge*
What is its length and appearance? 150 Centimeters-Very long but no too wide. It has a long hilt, curved. With a Black handle.

Sample mission:*
I didn't know what had happen it just happened so fast. One minute everyones heading home for some rest the next screams and foot steps. I wasn't sleeping like most nights I stood up watching the stars ontop of the trees. It was a long day avoiding everyone while still keepin my sane.*

There was a tensed scream unsual in the east part of the rukongai. It seemed as a woman was in pain. I jumped off the tree and ran towards the screams. First it was one but then I heard more it seemed as an attack was going on at the main square. As I arrived their pushing myself through the crowd running the opposite way. Their were bodies everywhere and the walls were painted red. As I made it to the center there was a large skinless beast with large arms and legs and sharp claws. It strucked down on the poor men and women near it. The screams got louder and another screech was heard. The beast got crazier as it ripped through bodies and it seemed to turn and begin walking towards where I stood. A man called out something as the beast approuched him.*

"Its a hollow!!! Get away!!!

As it made it's way towards me it stood still. As if it were staring at me. For a few moments it stood still then it ravished out another screech. As it lift it's arm and attempted to smash me. I was swept out the way and was placed away. It was a tall man with a blade in his hand.

"Dont worry son we got this."

The man leapt out towards the animal. Him and the others he was with sliced quickly at the "Hollow". It tried to attack back but never landed a hit. It was quickly taken out. As I ran back to the square the man turned around and smiled at me.*

"Well you've had a Long night sun so ho about you go on an get some sleep."

"who are you?"

"I am shizue kentus 11th division Shinigami."

"Shinigami?"

"Yes well I have to go bye son"

The man and his group disapeared quickly into the forest. I walked slowly back to the tree passing the crying men and women. I looked up at what people called the sereitei.

"Ill be a shinigami one day and I'll save everyone."

anime-niac
10-19-2009, 12:50 AM
Please use proper spelling and grammar. Your sentences are also very simple and repetitive, so I suggest you switch up your sentence structure usage. The application is very short in general, with very minimal detail for your profile and zanpakuto, and your sample mission does not meet the 1000 word minimum. Please make the appropriate corrections.