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Old 06-10-2007, 09:45 PM
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Just a quick little thing I wrote during silent reading. Yaoi, but no explicit content. Please comment with suggestions. (Akon is a tiny character who was cut out of the anime) Some slight swearing too.
"Akon!" Hisagi shouted as he entered the 12th division offices.
"The little shit is on a trip to the living world for some experiment," The 12th division taichou replied from the shadows.
"When will he be back?" Hisagi demanded rudely.
"He might not come back," Mayuri laughed. "Hey shit, come hither," he called to Nemu who followed at his heals. Hisagi left the offices, frowning slightly. It wasn't like Akon to go volentairly to the real world and even less like him to go without warning Hisagi. The tattooed man walked into someone.
"Watch where you're going!" Renji shouted. Hisagi made no sarcastic comment. "What's wrong?" Renji asked, his voice softening slight.
"Akon's in the real world, he didn't even tell me he was going," Hisagi mumbled.
"Oh, I guess it's a bad time to tell you that there has been a bad hollow attack on several shinigami, those killed haven't been identified-" Renji left the sentence hanging. Hisagi's eyes widened.
"No..." He turned on his heals and ran. 'That wasn't what Mayuri was talking about,' Shuuhei told himself. Mayuri was just playing with his mind. Hisagi ran to the 4th division offices. "The victims-have they been identified!" Hisagi nearly shouted.
"Looking for me?" A voice from of the the beds called. Hisagi spun around to look upon a bruised and bloodied Akon.
"Pssht, you wish forehead nipples," Shuuhei replied indignantly.
"You were, suggestive-tattoo," Akon smired. "You were worried about me."
"Why'd you go?" Hisagi asked with a look of absolute and utter betrayal. A wave of regret washed over Akon.
"I'm sorry, I wanted to but Mayuri refused to let me," Akon's face fell. "I tried to have Nemu bring you a note but Mayuri caught here," Akon supplied. Hisagi sat beside the bed.
"So what happened to you anyway?" Hisagi's voice was strained.
"I can't fight, you know that. It was a huge hollow, like that incident in the academy. It threw me like a ragdoll, Shuu, I was so scared. My gigai is a prototype, and vuenerable, I broke my leg. I was afraid that I wasn't going to get to see you again," Akon was close to tears. Hisagi took his hand, carressing it gentlely. Akon scooched over and tugged on Shuuhei's arm. Hisagi climbed into the bed, cautious of Akon's leg. Akon clamped his arms around Hisagi's middle.
"I'm here now, and so are you," Shuuhei whispered into his ear, fingering the horns on Akon's forehead.
"Don't go," Akon whispered back.
"I won't, I promise."

Okay so a bit OC and not too entertaining, tell me what you thought anyway, but be kind.
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Old 06-11-2007, 05:13 AM
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i thought it was pretty good, and i'm interested to know what's going to happen next.
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it was very tear-dropping, hisagi-san
*sniff*
can't wait for the next episode^^

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that's pretty good...

it kept me interested in reading it until the end!
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Thanks everybody! I'll prolly have another tomorrow.
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