Some love poems

[Keihatsu taiken]

Originally Posted by silent19

Your poems are for sure a summary of your great artistic spirit. I like the way how you express your feeling and thoughts; the images you deploy upon the reader are strong and vivid. I also like the transition between definite and abstract and the way you make the banal glow.

Have you written some in our maternal language too?

Thanks a lot ^_^ I'm glad i can express my feelings and thought so nicely I do it in order to bring something beautiful to others.
I write in our maternal language also. I'll leave you a link via VM.

[silent19]

It would be nice if everyone could express their feelings as you do, because I believe that every human has something unique that must be showed to the entire world.

[Tasapop]

I love impossible love. it's so beautiful! Made my heart ache. You truly are gifted

[Keihatsu taiken]

Author: Cristian Boldor aka Hatsu ^_^

Utter disappointment

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How can I pretend I’m fine?
When shivers come down my spine?
Where am I to draw the line?
In front of your feelings or mine?

I just put a brave face on
When I know I have to move on,
Past the illusions I came from.

Things are not the way they used to be,
I’m now swimming in my own misery,
Waiting for a wave to come and sweep me
Because I don’t want to live off of memories.

Our love seems dead, nourishing us no more,
I feel the chilly wind from down your core,
What are we to fight for?
All 60 seconds have left the minute score,
Thus imprisoning us in a timeless bore.

The heartbeat of our song
Still echoes in my head,
While she’s a living image
Of the past I thought was dead.

My tears have turned to ash,
Our gaining into trash,
I feel like I’ve begun to crush
Everything important I was holding in my stash.

Even though our time
Has been well spent,
We have to be sublime
In utter disappointment.

[Tasapop]

T_T so sad! I actually started crying! Why was it so sad?! Brilliant but heart wrenching!

[Keihatsu taiken]

Succubus

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It's because i love you too much
That i have to do this...

You're a selfish woman!
You've chosen to be such,
Never trying to bring peace,
Only living of off my insatiable kiss.

You've proven that even a marksman
Can shoot and miss
When the conditions are seemingly bliss.

It pains me to accept the truth,
Your ways of loving are wrong to boot,
I feel like a blind man
Being led the wrong path.

You even cut off me from my friends,
telling me they don't see who I really am,
So i stood and ate your every word
Like a silly cat following a thread.

Everytime i used to find the nerve
To muster up my forces,
You were changing the menu so to serve
A hot pie after the courses.

Great have been the days
When i wasn't trapped in a maze,
So i'm trying to remove myself
From the clutches of your demon half
For you only pay attention to your petty needs.

It's because i love you too much
That i have to do this...
Leave in the middle of the night
In order to begin my flight
From under your leeching wing,
A relationship that's made me forget about my own well being.

[parul22]

Very nice poem, I like it. Thank to share it. 2nd one poem is pretty good.

[FLUXARC]

First Night's Kiss

Draw that breath,
As before a daunting plunge,
And silence the world beyond our heartbeats.

Feel every bit of me,
As I do, every bit of you,
Even the heated depths of your soul,
Awash with wild flame,
Kindled by desire untamed.

And I will draw close, in answer to that flame;
I will seek the wakening warmth of your skin,
And draw it to me.

I will linger on the gentle caress of your breath,
As you let it go,
And, when our flames have risen into our chests,
And into our eyes,
I will take that fruit,
That births your breath,
And seal the sweet torment,
And free the flames.


By Fluxarc.

[Keihatsu taiken]

Originally Posted by parul22

Very nice poem, I like it. Thank to share it. 2nd one poem is pretty good.

Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it.

Originally Posted by FLUXARC

First Night's Kiss

Draw that breath,
As before a daunting plunge,
And silence the world beyond our heartbeats.

Feel every bit of me,
As I do, every bit of you,
Even the heated depths of your soul,
Awash with wild flame,
Kindled by desire untamed.

And I will draw close, in answer to that flame;
I will seek the wakening warmth of your skin,
And draw it to me.

I will linger on the gentle caress of your breath,
As you let it go,
And, when our flames have risen into our chests,
And into our eyes,
I will take that fruit,
That births your breath,
And seal the sweet torment,
And free the flames.


By Fluxarc.

As always, great poem Flux And thanks for putting it in my thread.