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Your poems are for sure a summary of your great artistic spirit. I like the way how you express your feeling and thoughts; the images you deploy upon the reader are strong and vivid. I also like the transition between definite and abstract and the way you make the banal glow.

Have you written some in our maternal language too?
Thanks a lot ^_^ I'm glad i can express my feelings and thought so nicely I do it in order to bring something beautiful to others.
I write in our maternal language also. I'll leave you a link via VM.
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It would be nice if everyone could express their feelings as you do, because I believe that every human has something unique that must be showed to the entire world.
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I love impossible love. it's so beautiful! Made my heart ache. You truly are gifted
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Author: Cristian Boldor aka Hatsu ^_^


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T_T so sad! I actually started crying! Why was it so sad?! Brilliant but heart wrenching!
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Very nice poem, I like it. Thank to share it. 2nd one poem is pretty good.
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First Night's Kiss

Draw that breath,
As before a daunting plunge,
And silence the world beyond our heartbeats.

Feel every bit of me,
As I do, every bit of you,
Even the heated depths of your soul,
Awash with wild flame,
Kindled by desire untamed.

And I will draw close, in answer to that flame;
I will seek the wakening warmth of your skin,
And draw it to me.

I will linger on the gentle caress of your breath,
As you let it go,
And, when our flames have risen into our chests,
And into our eyes,
I will take that fruit,
That births your breath,
And seal the sweet torment,
And free the flames.


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Very nice poem, I like it. Thank to share it. 2nd one poem is pretty good.
Thanks for the feedback I appreciate it.

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First Night's Kiss

Draw that breath,
As before a daunting plunge,
And silence the world beyond our heartbeats.

Feel every bit of me,
As I do, every bit of you,
Even the heated depths of your soul,
Awash with wild flame,
Kindled by desire untamed.

And I will draw close, in answer to that flame;
I will seek the wakening warmth of your skin,
And draw it to me.

I will linger on the gentle caress of your breath,
As you let it go,
And, when our flames have risen into our chests,
And into our eyes,
I will take that fruit,
That births your breath,
And seal the sweet torment,
And free the flames.


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As always, great poem Flux And thanks for putting it in my thread.
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